Ganondork
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It was an alright chapter. The fight was overall rather boring, though. You ended it far too quickly, and really the attacks were used over and over again. It needs some cleaning up, because at one point:
After a what? That seriously makes no sense. Other than that and the fight, it was an ok venture.
After a, they knew that this was serious, and that they would all die at the end
After a what? That seriously makes no sense. Other than that and the fight, it was an ok venture.