blue-eyes
Phoenix
- Joined
- Jul 28, 2010
- Location
- Among the stars
Here it is, my new story. If you signed up in Another Story Sign Ups, this is it. More action and stuff will happen later in, like 1-2 chapters from now or something
Elliot woke up and walked to his closet, and grabbed his red tunic. He heard a loud Kaw, and he opened his window. His red hawk, Zuko, flew in and landed on his shoulder.
Elliot looked around his room. He had a bed in one of the corners, and that was about all. The floor was a dark brown wood, and the walls were the same. There was a door opposite the bed, and the closet was next to the door.
Elliot’s room was on the second floor of his family’s house, and there was a tree branch that he could jump on to exit his room.
He jumped to the branch and climbed down the tree. Just then, he saw his front door slam shut. He walked through it, and he saw two men with swords attack his parents. He ran at them, only to be suspended in the air by his arms in the air by one of them, while the other one wounded his parents.
“Let go of me!” Elliot said angrily, and the man released his arms, only to grab him again.
“LET GO OF ME!!” Elliot yelled, and fire encased his arms in the shape of wings. He swung his arms, killing both men with the fire, which then disappeared. His Dad handed him a key and a note. Elliot ran outside, and yelled for the healers. They came and took his parents to the medical building and Elliot walked into his house again.
Elliot opened the note, which had -the key is to a secret tunnel that leads to a secret room, which has the rest of the information you need to know. The door is hidden in your closet.- scrawled on it. Elliot ran to his room, and found the tunnel. He went through it, and found the room, which had a red short sword, and a note that said -you’re the hero who will save the world. This sword can channel your fire powers through it. You will need to find the others with powers, and learn their abilities. Your hawk, Zuko, can assist you. Go to the blacksmith in Lorgavis and show him your sword.- Elliot exited the room, his orange eyes reflecting the light, and his blonde hair also shining. He started to go toward Lorgavis, with Zuko sitting on his shoulder
Chapter 1: The Beginning
Elliot woke up and walked to his closet, and grabbed his red tunic. He heard a loud Kaw, and he opened his window. His red hawk, Zuko, flew in and landed on his shoulder.
Elliot looked around his room. He had a bed in one of the corners, and that was about all. The floor was a dark brown wood, and the walls were the same. There was a door opposite the bed, and the closet was next to the door.
Elliot’s room was on the second floor of his family’s house, and there was a tree branch that he could jump on to exit his room.
He jumped to the branch and climbed down the tree. Just then, he saw his front door slam shut. He walked through it, and he saw two men with swords attack his parents. He ran at them, only to be suspended in the air by his arms in the air by one of them, while the other one wounded his parents.
“Let go of me!” Elliot said angrily, and the man released his arms, only to grab him again.
“LET GO OF ME!!” Elliot yelled, and fire encased his arms in the shape of wings. He swung his arms, killing both men with the fire, which then disappeared. His Dad handed him a key and a note. Elliot ran outside, and yelled for the healers. They came and took his parents to the medical building and Elliot walked into his house again.
Elliot opened the note, which had -the key is to a secret tunnel that leads to a secret room, which has the rest of the information you need to know. The door is hidden in your closet.- scrawled on it. Elliot ran to his room, and found the tunnel. He went through it, and found the room, which had a red short sword, and a note that said -you’re the hero who will save the world. This sword can channel your fire powers through it. You will need to find the others with powers, and learn their abilities. Your hawk, Zuko, can assist you. Go to the blacksmith in Lorgavis and show him your sword.- Elliot exited the room, his orange eyes reflecting the light, and his blonde hair also shining. He started to go toward Lorgavis, with Zuko sitting on his shoulder