Okay, thanks for your mini review. Yes, I do have problems with my writing of speech, sorry for that, I just write the stories so fast. Also these are not to be taking seriously. So you don't want to be in my story eh, well that's okay just want to know. My next story will be much bigger and include many more ZD users into it. I am working on it at the moment. Thanks for your critisim ^^ I always enjoy stuff like this so I can improve on myself as a writer.