It would be good to have one colored page with all the characters at the beginning, and then maybe one colored page per chapter or something? A bonus colored page with each update. Tiela looks really good by the way! Not sure about the bangs but the outfit is perfect. (and just by the way I forgot to mention that she's about 23)
In case you didn't know, this picture is a picture of a Gardevior protecting it's baby Ralts. I'm not sure what it's protecting it from but it's supposed to be, like, laying down it's life to save her child. BUT! I don't know how to color it. I'm not sure weather I should shade it in with pencil, color with Colored Pencils, Markers, or just leave it white. What do you guys think?