That looks amazing! You did great, ecspecially since it's the first time you've drawn one like this!! I don't think this needs to be redone at all, just keep up the good work! :yes:
ps. Thank you for taking the request
Okay, so I'm reading a book that takes place in the Victorian Era (To Say Nothing of the Dog(by Connie Willis))and it got me inspired to do thiese two:
Then I wanted to do another 'different angle' pic so I did this one:
Also, since the colored pencils my grandmother gave me don't look all that great on my pictures I'm going to do a computerized coloring and a black and white pencil of each of them from now on. I haven't done these yet for computerizing but I shall get to them soon.^^
It's great that your experimenting with different art mediums, that's the best way of finding out which one you like using the best.
Keep drawing a lot and practicing different poses, I can already see a major improvement in your understanding of anatomy from when you started this thread!