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@bfp: my character was trying to hold it in since he was in a public place.
@Ember: I guess, but now that Ordon is doing something with all their goats, they are also now a milk bar along with being a regular adult bar.
Also, chapter 2 will be up soon.
Here's chapter 2:
2: The Nightmare
I could hear Colin screaming for help in the distance. I was in the very south of Castle Town and Colin was in the center.
I sprinted toward him. Sweat was running heavily across my whole body. I finally reached Colin.
"L-l-look," his trembling finger was pointing at a golden wolf.
It's fur was white and gold and shined like the sun on a hot summer day. It was protecting the entrance to West Castle Town. Two gray wolves that looked like me were guarding the north and east entrances. And a black and gray wolf that greatly resembled Master Link guarded the entrance to the south right behind me.
In a split second, all of the wolves jumped on us and we were in a strange place. It was a large field of nothingness that was the same color as the gold wolf's fur and Hyrule Castle looked close but far away at the same time.
All the wolves were now humans. The gold wolf was now a gold-ish Stalfos with bits of armor here and there, and he had lost an eye. The black and gray wolf was now Master Link. And the two gray wolves were now......my parents? They couldn't be.
I was so confused about what was going on that I didn't even notice that I was still on the ground, if you can call it ground.
"Get up!" Colin yelled at me. "Get up! GET.........UP!!!"
I opened my eyes. I was back in Colin's bedroom. He was staring down at me.
"Thank the goddesses, he finally woke up!" Colin announced. "Its morning."
"Already?" I was surprised. I started to get up, but then I got an extreme headache. I laid back down, "I'll be downstairs in a minute. You can go ahead."
"Okay," Colin replied and walked downstairs to his family.
*
End of Chapter
@Ember: I guess, but now that Ordon is doing something with all their goats, they are also now a milk bar along with being a regular adult bar.
Also, chapter 2 will be up soon.
Here's chapter 2:
2: The Nightmare
I could hear Colin screaming for help in the distance. I was in the very south of Castle Town and Colin was in the center.
I sprinted toward him. Sweat was running heavily across my whole body. I finally reached Colin.
"L-l-look," his trembling finger was pointing at a golden wolf.
It's fur was white and gold and shined like the sun on a hot summer day. It was protecting the entrance to West Castle Town. Two gray wolves that looked like me were guarding the north and east entrances. And a black and gray wolf that greatly resembled Master Link guarded the entrance to the south right behind me.
In a split second, all of the wolves jumped on us and we were in a strange place. It was a large field of nothingness that was the same color as the gold wolf's fur and Hyrule Castle looked close but far away at the same time.
All the wolves were now humans. The gold wolf was now a gold-ish Stalfos with bits of armor here and there, and he had lost an eye. The black and gray wolf was now Master Link. And the two gray wolves were now......my parents? They couldn't be.
I was so confused about what was going on that I didn't even notice that I was still on the ground, if you can call it ground.
"Get up!" Colin yelled at me. "Get up! GET.........UP!!!"
I opened my eyes. I was back in Colin's bedroom. He was staring down at me.
"Thank the goddesses, he finally woke up!" Colin announced. "Its morning."
"Already?" I was surprised. I started to get up, but then I got an extreme headache. I laid back down, "I'll be downstairs in a minute. You can go ahead."
"Okay," Colin replied and walked downstairs to his family.
*
End of Chapter
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I've been getting a lot of ideas lately for some reason. And I'm just writing the chapters on the notes app of my iPod touch.
