Master Sword13
thatjoshoverthere
- Joined
- Oct 16, 2010
- Location
- South Carolina
I won't talk. Everyone just has to wait and see.
What I can tell you now is that the Dagger and what Elliot has on his chest are somehow related.Excellent job. So, I suppose the dagger is important? I mean, you make it a big deal, so I guess it's important. Is it the thing Elliot's hiding. Actually, no that I look closer at it, no. I'm confused.
I'm glad you enjoy the thickened plot. But when the Games begin, I can tell you now that everything is going to get more interesting.The plot thickens. First some mark on his chest, and then a knife. Wonder how they're connected.
And I love the part where they think Chailyn can't be trusted. (She can't.)
You put Erak's weapon as a Halberd (I think that's what it's called) so I gave him a bow as an excuse to make him look sucky. And while I do feel bad for the girl, she was unclaimed. So my feelings for her are decreased by 3/4.Good job..........
........although you made my guy kinda sucky.......
Nah, he was fine, shooting probably just is not his strong point. Good job with the action, poor girl who thought she could outsmart the Gamemakers........
Just unnamed characters. There are 7 named, which means that there are only 4 unclaimed characters still in the Arena.Who all died in the Copercornia Bloodbath? And nice writing MS 13.