ChargewithSword

Huh. I can't find my way around anymore.

Is it just me or have you noticed how different the forum home page is?

I wanted to thank-you for the tremendous feedback. I appreciate it very much.
I'm very happy that you can see what I have been trying to do with my characters. I wasn't sure if they were coming across or not.

Yes, I will try to slow it down on the second draft, I do agree with you. I was worried about it being to long and having 'useless plot' within the first few chapters, so I jumped the gun a little. But I was wondering if you had any suggestions on how to slow it down.

Thanks so much for reading. ^^

this is a good good game so funny http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hxPPsqmJytI lol

hey go no zelda dungeon chat room now so we can talk zelda 1:29 PM i am dark master

And one more question, Charge: If I want to write something(a story for example) in which forum should i put it?

I hope this doesn't need much time.................

When can we start writing that Zelda movie????

Don't worry, I'll make sure to stay updated on your story (although I might not get the chance to read it during my Galaxy 2 hiatus that I'm going to be on in about a week and a half).

NO i will not sorry if you want to know are thing just about rare zeldas

Thanks for your constructive comments on my poems! It is very much appreciated. Because it is done a while back it makes it a bit lame to be honest. I never have been a writer. I never seem to finish a story But I really appreciate your comments.

Thanks alot. And I have you to thank for that, Charge. If it wasn't for you, I never would've improved on my chapter and I never would've grown as an author. And for that, I thank and appreciate you.

hey whats your top zelda game. do you like like rare zeldas like ZELDA WATCH or
ZELDA GAME AND WATCH

ZELDA GAME AND WATCH is the hardest zelda game ever

zelda watch is a lot like loz it has 4 dungeons with 4 rooms pre dungeon and The enemies are Keese and Gels The main villain is Aquamentus the view overhead and the items are the Boomerang/Bombs/Sword boss 1 1s called the first son of Aquamentus boss 2 1s called the 2 son of Aquamentus boss 3 is 1s called the 3 son of Aquamentus
AND boss 4 the final boss of the game is IS Aquamentus all the bosses look almost the same as Aquamentus. Aquamentus is so hard. he shoots a fireball that Warps all over the room at you. you have know recoveretime and you have 2 lives and 3 heart. now what could be harder is then that i will tell you.
Zelda Game and Watch is the hardest zelda game ever. first the game is a lot like AOL so it is a sidescoler
and you can only go up. ther is 1 dungeon but it is BIG! ther is over 40 rooms so it is big now The main villains are the 8 Dragons of Havoc and enemies include Genies Moblins and Stalfos all the bosses are is a Dragons of Havoc ther are 8 Dragons thay shoot a lot of fireballs at you overall Zelda Game and Watch
is harder then zelda watch but thay are all hard

also what is your top zelda villians

all zelda villians
Ganon loz AOL ALTTP oot /BS The Legend of Zelda /BS The Legend of Zelda Triforce of the Gods/ BS The Legend of Zelda: The Ancient Stone Tablets OOA OOS FSA WW TP Master Quest Zelda The Wand of Gamelon /Zelda's Adventure/Link The Faces of Evil
Vaati FS FSA MC
Aquamentus zelda watch LOZ BS The Legend of Zelda OOS
King Bulblin tp
zant tp
Byrne st
Demon train st
cole st
Malladus st
bellum ph
Dragons of Havoc zelda game and watch
Majoras Mask mm
Cubus daughters ph
nightmare LA
DARK LINK FSA OOA a link to the past gba AOL oot st
Phanton Ganon oot FSA WW
Thunderbird AOL
Twinrova oot OOS OOA
Onox OOS
Veran OOA
Oinker Warrior Leader Freshly Picked Tingle's Rosey Rupeeland
Beetle Lord Death Bug Freshly Picked Tingle's Rosey Rupeeland
Uncle Rupee Freshly Picked Tingle's Rosey Rupeeland
Stalfo Captain Freshly Picked Tingle's Rosey Rupeeland MM LA
Segare Color Changing Tingle's Love Balloon Trip
yamoji Color Changing Tingle's Love Balloon Trip
Stallord tp links cross bow training
Agahnim Alttp OOA BS The Legend of Zelda Triforce of the Gods
Helmaroc king FSA WW

I see. I may just have to put the original chapter five back in to see how it is. I personally felt nothing really got done in that chapter, but maybe it's worth another go. I'll probably keep the fighting chapter, but add in the original chapter five as well. I guess I'll see about getting it back in there (although chances are, it won't be identical to what it was originally).

I would send it to you, but I no longer have it (I lack Word or some other program that lets me have text files on my laptop and my Mom's desktop is too unreliable). And trust me, if you knew anything about it, I almost guaruntee that you would agree with me that it's horrible. It's an entire chapter with nothing more than Link getting his equipment (sword, shield, and magical satchel for carrying stuff) and Swiftblade telling him what he needed to do (get the Pendants of Virtue and then the Master Sword, as specified in the new chapter five). Trust me, it's very boring and not worth the time.