No, he looks awesome, even if you think that's basic. You actually provided quite good info. Feel free to add more or change stuff whenever you want, so long as he isn't introduced; but do let me know somehow so I can be aware of the changes. Also, I like the back story you provided, and I surely know his role now. I can assure you that you won't be reading anything on him until book 2. So, when the posting starts, I hope you can be patient for his epic appearance.
Well, all that was stopping me from advancing the story a bit was your submission, but now that I have it, I can surely get things done. You will see the story soon enough, but not tonight nor tomorrow. I will simply post it randomly one of these upcoming days. Thank you, and thank you all others who submitted. I won't let you down. ~Archangel
Edited: I added a character sign up sheet in case you peeps need to know what you need to fill out. I've also decided that sign ups for this series will end this upcoming Saturday. Other peeps who have joined by pm or email are Rainy, Magatha, the_miserable, Violet. Here are some of those submissions:
Character submitted by TatlTails:
Name: Luke O'Hare
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Very young and naive, sweet and kind as a puppy dog. He cares about everyone he meets, even if they hate him in return. Very emotional, quick to cry if someone is mean to him. But he's even quicker to forgive, and will do anything for his friends. Anything. Literally anything. He's the most loyal little thing you will ever meet. But he can also be a little... out there. He'll sometimes just completely space out, or say or do random things with no meaning to them. He's a little nutters in the head, but that doesn't take away from his kind, innocent soul. Though, if he's ever given a weapon... All that will go away. He'll become a calm, serious warrior, ready to fight whatever he has to to protect the people he cares about. The warrior goes away when the weapon does, though, and the puppy will return.
Backstory: His mother was a very sickly woman. Having a baby only made her sicker. She died when Luke was young, just young enough to remember her, and left him with his father. His father was... not a nice man. He was abusive, and a drunk, and treated Luke wrongly in every way imaginable. Verbally, physically, neglectfully. Luke's poor head became so sensitive from all the beatings he got, that he pretty much shuts down every time someone even touches his hair. Petting his head will make him act like a literal puppy, nuzzling into the petting hand and making cute little puppy noises. But one day, enough became enough. It was a full moon, and Luke had been treated even worse than usual. He'd never been able to get control of his wolf form, and it always got him and his dad in trouble. His dad had had enough, and made more threats than ever. Well, it seemed Luke remembered something after this transformation, because he killed the man as soon as he turned wolf. A very confused and heartbroken Luke was banished from his tribe the very next morning. What happens after that, is up to you.
Weapon of Choice: Katana, or any kind of thin-bladed sword.
Other: I'm not sure. He speaks in a very relaxed and almost baby-talk-ish dialect, and he loves to cook. Anything else you're wondering, just ask me.
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Character submitted by Raindrop14:
Name: Abigale Connor
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Appearance: Long dark brown hair to just below shoulder blades and brown eyes. Long brown pants, brown long sleeved shirt and brown boots.
Race: Human
Personality: Nice, kind and loyal to her friends
Weapons/Items: Bow and arrows
Other: N/A
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Character submitted by Magatha:
Name Magatha MacIntyre
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance: golden blonde hair tied back, green eyes
Height: 5’7”
Weight: 140lbs.
Outfit(s): She has a single pretty green dress for one outfit and something more practical for everyday activities.
Weapons: a celtic spearhead(I am a bit obsessed with Irish stuff right now... Basically it's a dagger with a hollow handle so you can put it on a walking stick to make a spear.) A normal dagger as well.
Items: A walking stick(to go with the spearhead)
Other: She is a poor orphan, so she doesn’t own much, but has learned to defend herself over the years.