I think that you should stop it with the "I took off one point because I didn't like it" stuff. The content of the signature is completely up to the user that has it. The point of the thread is to give feedback on the effects, composition, and quality of the signature. Not the content. There is a whole other thread dedicated to rating the characters and content of the signatures.
Anyway... I give you a 3/10 for trying. You have some text, which is ok, but It'd be cooler if you had an actual signature tag in it.