General Art Second Hunger Games Fanfic

[Caeda]

Internal conflict! What does he mean by that, "What am I"? Also, I like the small fact he was too busy to realize who the new Presedent was. That's just funny. Overall, this was very well written. Can't wait for the next one.

 

[Master Sword13]

I have to know... What happens to Rio? Ah... How the plot thickens... Can't wait to read the next one, Myriad. Keep it up!

 

[Jedizora]

I completely forgot about this, looks like I made it just in time. I would assume that Rio also died, MS.
EDIT: Nevermind, I read that wrong.

 

[Myriadviper42]

.........Rio won...........what exactly do you mean?

 

[Ⓡⓔⓖⓘⓝⓛⓔⓘⓕ]

I've caught up and read the whole story so far. It was quite entertaining, I must say. The whole battles, the killings, the snakes and crocs appearing, the characters dying one by one, some in an attempt to help othes, it was so good that it added more action to the story. Rio won in the end, but he's trying to remember something from the past, something that has to do with that grayish haired man. I dunno, maybe in the next story everything becomes clear. Good job on this one.