Yay, my character showed up! Really great chapter. It's pointless to ask what hher problem is, isn't it?
Yep, it is, as I prefer for you all to find out by reading.
Don't worry, it won't be long for you to find out what's going on.
Good chapter, I'm also wondering what the princess' problem is, but I guess I'll have to wait to find out.
Yep, just like everyone else.
Fantastic chapter!:clap: Can't wait to see what'll happen next!
I'm getting to that, but first I needed to introduce these other characters. I'm afraid Dusana, Ashie, Tekara, Kirana, and Serris will come up in a few more chapters, probably around chapter 7 or 8, so just wait for them, once they join they'll have lots of story time.
I don't want you guys/gals feeling left out, it's just the way the story has to be.
Anyway, here's the next update.
--Edit--Btw, Gretel's name has been changed to Aylin, requested by my own friend. just in case you are expecting the old Gretel to show up, she won't, she'll be known as Aylin instead of Gretel, forgot to mention that earlier.
1 day before Saga's departure to Midgard
Totenheim, Valhalla, 9:56 AM (7: 56 PM Midgard Time)
The Arcangelus' walk was serene and graceful, and as she transited through the keep's long white stone corridor, Evelina Brengle kept her head up high in a proud and elegant way. She was not tall, barely stood around five-feet-six-inches. Her eyes were like two beautiful emerald gems, her figure was slender, and her hair was tidy and of a golden hue, which Evelina kept in a banded ponytail at her back. The ponytail swung lively as she walked through that corridor. Her skin was soft and white, and she was dressed that day in her regal silver and gold dress with a silvery belt going around her waist. At her right side hip she carried a satchel and a holster with a sheathed double-bladed dagger, at her left side she carried her golden ageless sword within a silvery scabbard. The sword had been her companion ever since she had received it at her graduation nearly two thousand years ago.
Evelina felt anxious, thrilled, and glad to be back within the confines of Maoka Keep, a place she had often been at, although it had been more than two years since she last was here. The way to the Keep had been long and cold, for Totenheim was actually located on the northern sector of Valhalla, which was covered with thick ice and snow. But besides the long way there and the coldness that Evelina'd had to endure, the trek had also been filled with unexpected turns and events for the Angelus. Evelina had run into trouble five miles away from reaching the keep. A pack of large snow wolves had attacked her, and though one had bit her left forearm, Evelina had successfully killed the beasts using just her sword and a double-bladed dagger. Then, two miles away from reaching her goal, with the mighty Keep visible in the distance on a mountain, another foul beast came out of nowhere and attacked her, this one being a giant hairy spider. The Angelus dealt with the monster and had cursed the neighboring realm of Jotunheim for the trouble, for those beasts had long ago come from there. Similar monsters and other beasts now ran rampant all over Asgard. Despite her troubles with the beasts, Evelina had taken heart knowing that all the effort and trouble would pay off soon enough.
She rounded the corridor's corner and came upon another corridor, although this one was wider and filled with a few more angelus guards and guardian statues on the sides. At the end awaited a golden steel door with the design of an eclipse in the middle. The door, Evelina already knew, opened in two halves and to the sides. Behind that door awaited the being whom she had come to see.
Two buffed up winged angelus standing guard outside a golden door quickly bowed as she neared them, and one of them opened up the door for her. Evelina smiled at the guards, who smiled back courteously. A small emblem resembling a crown with wings that she wore on her right side of the dress let anyone who set eyes on her know that she was a Captain.
Evelina walked right in without hesitation. The door shut tight behind her, and her emerald eyes noticed a seated figure behind a desk some twenty feet away. The figure, who had been busy reading a thick book, turned to regard the door as this one closed with a low thud. Evelina, from her place, merely stared at the figure, but with a wide smile, which was returned by the figure with one of her own.
"Evelina!" the being over at the desk immediately laid down the book she had been reading and stood up.
"Shiek," Evelina said proudly and lowly as she regarded the figure. The Angelus saw as she came towards her.
"Well this surely is a surprise, Evelina," smiled Shiek, who was a short-haired brunette Arkangelus dressed in a silvery light-weight armor.
The two met in the center of the cozy room and stared briefly at each other. Shiek, who had dark eyes and peachy skin, noted the emblem that her friend wore on the side of the chest.
"Let me correct my earlier remark," Shiek chuckled lightly. "It surely is a surprise, Captain Brengle! When did you get appointed?"
"A year ago, actually," Evelina told, her tone glad and proud. "The All-Mother thought the realm could use another captain."
"I knew it wouldn't take you long," Shiek gleamed at her proudly. "After all, you did learn from me and applied to your ways of life all that I taught you back then."
Evelina smiled cozily and gratefully, then they hugged.
"It's been a while, my friend," Evelina said excitedly when they let go of each other.
"Exactly two years, five months, and five days," Shiek pat Evelina on the shoulder. "I've missed you since then."
"Likewise, Commander Shiek," Evelina glanced about the room. "Ah, look at this. You never change, old friend. Everything is as I remember it, tidy and clean. "
"Well," Shiek laughed and glanced about the room as well. "I've got to set the example, being the oldest Arkangelus alive demands that of me."
Evelina smiled and nodded at that. That is when Shiek noticed the white bandages around her friend's left forearm.
"Oh, what happened to you?"
"A little trouble with some beasts," smiled Evelina, not caring much about it. "I'll be fine, though."
"Are you sure?" Shiek asked. "I have some medicine and herbs here."
"I'll be alright," said Evelina, and Shiek nodded understandingly. The Angelus felt proud of her dear friend just by looking at her. Shiek was famous all over Asgard just for being the eldest being alive. Shiek went back to the days of ancient, to the days when Ao the Supreme God had created everything and ruled over his designs. Before Angelus had been created, Shiek and many other celestial sons known as Arkangelus had been created. She had seen and experienced many a things during her nearly eight-millennia prolonged life, including the death of her dear creator at the hands of one of his own sons, the rise and fall of other All-Fathers, and the changing of the universe. She was old, but despite her age, she resembled a beautiful twenty-five year old girl who was just about ready to be seen as an adult woman.
"Ah, alright," Shiek sighed profoundly. "If you insist. But come, Evelina, let us sit so that we may be more comfortable. I know how long and dangerous trek you had to endure, you must be tired, hungry, and thirsty."
"That I am," Evelina agreed to that and followed her dear friend, who took her to a white clothed table just off to the side. They both sat down opposite of each other, Evelina staring at a magical silver candleholder which sat in the middle on the clothed table lighting up part of the room. Not only was there that candleholder, but also a silver tray with pastry, and a pot with a spout, and six golden goblets. Adorning the walls of the room were several bookcases and white drapes, some which were torn and old looking. To the north end of the room behind the desk was a hearth. It was burning with a fire which was what kept the room cozy. And off to the desk's right side was a door on the wall leading to Shiek's sleeping quarters.
"I am sure you didn't just come here to have a look at my own self again," Shiek laughed as she took a hold of the pot and two of the goblets. "Tell me, Evelina, do you bring tidings from the main region?"
Evelina took the time to clear her throat, for she knew the time to let Shiek know of the news had come. Shiek poured a thin, dark liquid from the pot on to the goblets, then she reached out and offered a goblet to her friend.
Evelina reached for the goblet and took it, then she took it up to her mouth and drank the beverage, which was actually warm and tasty. Honeydew, the beverage was called, Evelina knew its flavor at heart. Shiek then shoved the tray across the table and Evelina was able to get her hands on a tasty sweet baked bread, which she took a bite out of almost immediately. When she was done swallowing the bread, she announced.
"I come on behalf of the All-Mother. I was sent to deliver a letter to you, Commander."
"Shiek will do," Shiek smiled at her. "We established that long ago, remember?"
Evelina nodded in embarrassment. "Yes I do, Shiek. Sorry, it's just that...everyone calls you Commander, I forget at times."
Shiek proceeded. "Don't worry about it, I know how it is. So, where is this letter you spoke of?"
She saw as Evelina searched her satchel and brought out the sealed letter, which she offered to her.
Shiek stood up and reached out for the letter. As soon as she had it in her hands she removed the seal and commenced reading it as she remained standing beside the much younger Angelus.
The content was brief, and so after a minute or so, Shiek folded the letter and then regarded her friend, who was eating and drinking still.
"Is there something I need to know?" Evelina looked up at her.
Shiek, her face seeming a little troubled, merely walked away and sat back down, letting her friend finish up, she even told her to finish up, for Evelina had asked again whether something was wrong.
"What is it, Shiek?" Evelina asked once she had eaten the whole piece of bread.
"A bit of trouble in Midgard," Shiek flatly responded. "It seems as though you and I will be teaming up with Freya's daughters, All-Mother's orders."
Evelina rose her eyebrows in surprise, her face brightening excitedly. "Oh my! Jzak and Aylin!"
Shiek nodded, her semblance calm but also troubled. Looking upon her, Evelina believed the contents of the letter had put her friend in that state. Was there something else that the letter said that Shiek did not speak about?
"Well what's the mission, my friend...I mean...if you can tell me, that is."
"I think I will tell you along the way," Shiek informed, and she stood up from her chair. "The All-Mother said we should meet with them at Crag's Point as soon as possible."
"Crag Point," Evelina stood up as well. "I have never been there, but that's not far from here, right?"
"You are right, it's midway between this region and the eastern one, New Orlea, which has been assigned to Freya's daughters. We should get going, I surely don't want to keep them waiting."
"Then I am ready to go," Evelina quickly stated.
"Good," Shiek said, moving away. "Come with me, I'll just grab a few essentials for the road and we will be on our way."
Evelina followed her friend, wondering what was the matter down in Midgard.
*End of Chapter*