It's not a problem that there's a lot of text, I was just very tired last night. Anyway, I've read all of it now and I must say those are very interesting characters you got there.
I especially like the backstories of Ascynthia, Emeri and Aridessa. It seems like you've put a lot of thought into them, and I really think you did great!
And about Teledestria, there seem to be some important stuff regarding that planet. I'd very much like to know, considering I liked Emeri and Aridessa so much. ^^