Chilfo Freeze

Yeah it was. How'd you like the lyrics? Shows that bronies aren't focusing on the younger aspects of the show (theories have been developed based on things that happen in the show).

Oh, and listen to this. It's MLP but it's kinda messed up. I'll include the lyrics underneath in spoiler tags

[video=youtube;xOrR42Fvg7I]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xOrR42Fvg7I&feature=plcp[/video]

I think I liked it better cause of the house style on it. What they normally do seems to me to be a strange mix of trip-hop and techno/electronica. Like I said, I really don't know why.

I liked what they did for Tron and a few others that I can't think of right now but for the most part I don't for some reason.

I've been listening to UFK Dubstep on YouTube

:lol: Fair enough. But the music could apply even if it wasn't based on MLP. And the basis is only a loose basis.

Nice, but I don't get into Daft Punk as much. IDKY but it's just not me I guess.

This one was crazy!

[video=youtube;CSemARaqGqE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CSemARaqGqE[/video]

This song is beautiful.

[video=youtube;h3kSPHcjN34]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h3kSPHcjN34&feature=g-user-u[/video]

Now if I could just nail the prelude, the whole story would be easy for me to write, it is the prelude that I am having trouble finishing. At first I had a good idea, and I wrote it, but then last night I deleted without having copied it to another doc, and I totally forgot and saved the story without the prelude. lolz. That sux since it was around thrice the info that you read. Tis ok, I wanted to change the whole story feeling anyway. I thought the way I had it looked good, but it sounded so serious, and I decided to make it less serious. Anyway, yeah, getting there bit by bit.

When do you expect to update again, lovely wifey?

You're already giving me kisses on the cheek and I haven't done anything to merit that kinda reward. *kisses Chilfo's cheek in return* I guess I wanted to return the favor.

Anyway, yeah, hope that goes well. I really hope I get that done so at least I won't look like a fool with peeps who might say, "Oh he wanted to self publish his book and he couldn't even do that, what a failure."

Should be a good story, Chilfo, what with all the characters involved. And not to brag or anything, but over here I already have like twenty books ready to be sold among relatives and friends, but I am not doing this for money, I just want to see my work made into a book, that's all. I really don't care about selling it. Hey, if peeps buy it, that's great, but I do it for fun, just like you. ^^

hello c:

I need to re-jive LS....

I have the heart and the will to make it happen, Gobli.

--You do, Chilfo, you are a strong writer. I believe in you. ^^

In ways, I like how I've written my story. I like that in some aspects I can keep a reader hooked and wanting more. Although, other aspects have restricted me from progressing in my story. I'll think of something, Gobli. My hubby shall be amazed!

--You will be fine. Btw, I am always amazed of you, my wifey. You're everything this Gobli could have asked for, and more.

Yeah, your story has had some major progress. The type of progress that a trilogy should withhold, it's outstanding. I'll wait, considering it seems like that's what you want me to do anyways. The final product should be great!

--It will be for the best. Once the book is offered on that site, you will be able to buy it cheaply, say...10 dollars or less? But I wouldn't want you to buy it, instead, perhaps you could allow me to send it as a gift to you? As I said in that thread, I wanna send those of you who want it, a copy of my book free of charge, and only because I want peeps here to have something to remember me by other than this site. So a book or books of my stories and with your characters in it would probably be for the best. One day peeps will look back and say, "Ah, I remember those times that I spent with Gobli. At least he got his dream come true." That dream would be turning my writing into a book, even if it is not published professionally, just self published. A book is a book, imo.

Anyway, Chilfo, gotta go have lunch now. I don't know if I will be around later today because I have taken a liking to playing online, so you might not see me here as you usually have in past days. If I am not playing, then I will be writing and perhaps browsing ZD at times. Take care and have fun, wifey. <3 ~Gobli

You are halfway there, then. Just push through it and you will get your story done. So don't panic, you won't be a failure in your first attempt, will you? lol

But you are right, you should concentrate on advancing the story. Take mine for example, the chapters that I sent you actually make up half of that story that I wanna publish. What you read pushed the first book's plot quite a ways, wouldn't you say? I mean, you went from knowing about a dragir who escapes death to a woman who takes care of her child, but in between all that, you also read about the way of life between dragir and Jyy, although not much, but you still got a pretty good idea of the hatred between them. The first book, I always had in mind relating how this dragir grows amidst the humans. The following chapters take care of that, which you did not read, btw. I would tell you more about the whole plot that the prelude covers, it just opens up so many possibilites for this world of mine. ( You also did not read that prelude, but I assure you that many things are said in it that will let the reader know what to expect but also leaves them wondering) So like I said, I'd tell you, but I want to see if I can get this short tale published so I can be on my way to writing a long series featuring my dragir race and those characters that peeps like you were kind enough to submit. I have a few chapters that I could send you later on, you know, the continuation of the story, but perhaps you have your hands full, and besides, I wanna let you read it in the version of a book. So do you wanna wait or do you want to read those?

Aw, you hugged this ugly Gobli. Nice, that makes me feel so <3d.

Here is some more secrets from me from my writing. Before I write a chapter, Chilfo, I tend to think about some scenes before I go on ahead to write it out. When you picture what you want to write, words just come to your head and that is why I am such a fast writer, because when it comes to describing a scene or characters talking, I already pictured that in my head and know what to write to get that done. It makes things much simpler for me to think about the major scenes before I go on ahead to write them. Writing on the go is alright, but most of those tales will end with peeps abandoning them or getting WB, because they don't have a solid script or story background as backup.

Tell me, Chilfo. How many chapters do you think your story will feature over all?

Oh, btw, I read your edit. That looks much better, Chilfo. ^^