blue-eyes

Instead of:

Jon: "I haven't seen you in forever!"
Tim: "I know, how have you been?"

And so forth. Do:

Jon and Tim hadn't seen each other in a very long time and they spoke for hours. They talked about their lives, their children, their jobs, and their wives.

Yep, and left you some feedback.

I've had that problem before. I'm not entirely sure how to fix it. What I normally do is highlight the words behind it copy it. Then I do backspace and write the letter. Then I paste the rest

it's from the video. or, somthing.

lol. my friends and i were trying to scare each other last night, and we had just watched the breakdancing vid. so i opened the front door, and closed it and said.
Dark Link is breakdancing on the front porch.
Zant is breakdancing on the front lawn.
Ganondorf is breakdancing on the roof
*looks turns to look at them in the living room*
and link is breakdancing in the living room.

okay. let me know when the next chunk of story is up!

i just read and commented. when will the next half be posted?

that's okay. i kinda like it that way a little better.

lol. Um, I have no idea. I'm pretty sure it's the same and if not you can shoot me.

7/14/2011. If you live in america.

Nothin much. I'm going to be gone for a little while on a camping trip so you wont see me on here for two weeks. I leave on the 25th.

as soon as it get darks here, i'll post Chapter 3, Lizy's Training i think the title is.

(runs away screaming into her house and jumps in the shower fully clothed)

ewwwwww. (helps beb get up but he just falls in his puke again)

then screw the Hunger Games and write that story!