Twilight Princess Typos and Improvements to Twilight Princess Walkthrough

[Bbaass_TMH]

Hey everyone.

I recently finished my first playthrough of Twilight Princess (for the Gamecube), and am now playing it again, but this time I'm using Zeldadungeon's walkthrough of the game to make it a 100% run.
While I was reading a part of the walkthrough, I noticed a typo in it. I then reported it using the "Contact Us" form of your website.
However, after I found a couple more typos, I decided to make a list of them and report them in bulk.

Just today, I thought it best to instead make a forum post about it, instead of using the contact form.

Note that I am playing the Gamecube version, so if I report something that is not a typo but a gameplay thing, I recommend that someone should confirm if it is the same for the Wii version of the game.

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On several of the webpages, the text appears out of place when using my webbrowser's (Google Chrome Version 34.0.1847.131 m) zoom function (set to 150% zoom).
One example is the last paragraph of text of section 3.1: Spirit of Light, Faron.
The majority of the text is displayed to the right of the images titled "Spirit of Light, Faron." and "The Vessel of Light.".
Below the images however, on the left side of the page, is the text: "small white dots."
Most other examples of text that looks odd is when a single line of text, usually the last line in a paragraph of text that is to the left of one or more images, extends below and underneath the images.
While this is not a typo or an error in the walkthrough, I just think it doesn't look good. It doesn't really need to be changed, as I assume it's not as simple as fixing a typo, but I just wanted to point it out anyway.


For the mini-bosses and bossfight sections, there is a short summary at the end of them. Most, but not all, have the text "Summery" instead of Summary.


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-05.php
Section 5.1: Hyrule Field
The header of this section, containing small images of characters, enemies and items, has the text "Heart Pieces" above the two golden bug images, instead of the text "Golden Bugs", like in section 5.4: Reuniting with Epona.

Section 5.4: Reuniting with Epona
4th paragraph, last line: "Leave the village by existing to the east." - exiting, not existing.
8th and 9th paragraphs: These can be swapped around, so that the player doesn't have to cross the bridge three times.


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-06.php
Main header: "This portion of the guide end after..." - ends, not end

Section 6.4: Scaling Death Mountain
6th small image caption: "Use the iron boots to by." - to walk by
8th small image caption: "More summo wrestling." - sumo, not summo
6th and 7th paragraph: Instead of having the player lose once to Gor Coron, the Iron Boots can simply be equipped before walking too far into the room and triggering the cutscene.
Last paragraph: "He asks for you help to go to the aid of Darbus." - remove the word help


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-07.php
Section 7.3: Second Goron Elder
4th paragraph: "Just wait and then crane" - the, not then
4th paragraph: "The magnetic boots will pull you up" - crane, not boots
Description box for Heart Piece #8: "... the room is diveded into two areas." - divided, not diveded
Description box for Beamos: "If the red jewell on the beamos status spots Link, it will shot a laser out. One arrow in the eye will deactiveate a beamos." - jewel, not jewell - statues, not status - "it will shoot out a laser", not "it will shot a laser out" - deactivate, not deactiveate


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-08.php
Section 8.1: Kakariko Village
4th paragraph: the word "poll" is used several times. It should instead be "pole".
6th paragraph: Even though it is not mentioned, the hawkeye can only be purchased after completing the challenge that gives the player heart piece #9.
Description box for Hawkeye: location says "Male Mart", it should say "Malo Mart".

Section 8.5: Zora's Domain
6th paragraph: "you can walk around and talk to the Zora" - listen, not talk, because Link is in wolf form.


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-09.php
Section 9.4: Lots to do in Castle Town
The header of this section, containing small images of characters, enemies and items, has the text "Heart Piece 15" below the image of the heart piece. It should instead say "Heart Piece #15".

Section 9.8: Enter the Lakebed Temple
2nd paragraph: "25points" is written twice here, both of them should have a space between the number and the word.
3rd paragraph: "it actually doubles both bomb bags that you already have, and any bags you get in the future." - afaik, if someone has been following the walkthrough up to this point, they already have all bomb bags.


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-10.php
Section 10.1: Dungeon Map
Description box for Helmasaur: "use it to pull off its sheild and then slash away." - shield, not sheild

Section 10.3: The Clawshot
1st paragraph: "showing that there are multieple hanging platforms" - multiple, not multieple
Description box for Clawshot: "gives Link the abilty to pull items" - ability, not abilty


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-11.php
Section 11.9: Kakariko Village Poe Souls
4th and 5th paragraph: "in plain site" - sight, not site

Section 11.12: Hyrule Field Poe Souls
Move the section related to poe soul #25 to after poe souls #26 and #27. This avoids a little unneeded backtracking.

Section 11.14: Castle Town Poe Souls
1st paragraph: The guide talks about a bridge on the other side of castle town. However, if a player follows the walkthrough to the letter, this bridge has not yet been repaired.
Description box for Poe Soul #29: "in plain site" - sight, not site




I am not done with my 100% playthrough of the game yet, so if I find more typos or possible improvements, I will add them to this list.

 

[Bbaass_TMH]

Adding some more things I found.
After thinking about it, I came to the conclusion that there more changes that can be made to reduce the need for backtracking, but that is a lot more work. I'm just going to continue looking for errors and typos, and add those to this list.

http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-12.php
Section 12.4: North Gerudo Desert
The header of this section, containing small images of characters, enemies and items, has the text "MortalDraw" below the image of the scroll. It should instead say "Mortal Draw".
Description box for golden bug #22: "There are two sand tenches in this area" - trenches, not tenches


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-14.php
Section 14.2: More to do in Castle Town
1st small image caption: "Give some more bugs to Agathia" - Agitha, not Agathia
6st, 7th, 8th, 9th and 10th small image captions: These are all wrong.

Section 14.4: Navigating Peek Province
Section header: "Peek Province" - Peak, not Peek

Section 14.5: Enter the Snowpeak Ruins
1st paragraph: "He will knock on the three and a piece of ice will fall." - tree, not three
1st paragraph: "He then uses that to roll down the mountain." - slide, not roll
2nd paragraph: "in this middle of a snowy mountain." - the, not this


http://www.zeldadungeon.net/Zelda11-twilight-princess-walkthrough-15.php
Section 15.1: Map of the Mansion
Section header: The characters section of the header for Yeta has Yeto's image, not Yeta's.
Description box for character introduction of Yeta: Again, wrong image.
Description box for character introduction of Yeta: "and leads you in many directions throughout the Ruins in search of the Mirror Shard." - Bedroom key, not Mirror Shard
2nd paragraph: "A red spot is filled in the map where she says the mirror is" - Bedroom key, not mirror

Section 15.2: An Ordon Pumpkin?
12th paragraph: "where Yeta said the mirror shard can be found" - Bedroom key, not mirror shard
12th paragraph: "This is definitely not a mirror shard," - Bedroom key, not mirror shard
Description box for Ordon Pumpkin: "in search of the Mirror Shard." - Bedroom key, not mirror shard

Section 15.4: Ball and Chain
Description box for Ordon Goat Cheese: "when searching for the Mirror Shard." - Bedroom key, not Mirror Shard
7th paragraph: "not the mirror shard, but some Ordon goat cheese." - Bedroom key, not mirror shard

Section 15.5: Some Hidden Heart Pieces
2nd paragraph: "while she tries to remember where she put the mirror shard." - Bedroom key, not mirror shard

 

[Justac00lguy]

I think this would be more suited to a blog post, or you could possibly PM some of the staff in order to make them aware of the typos. Since there is no real discussion to be had I'm going to close this for now.