Mr.Verto
爆発物マネージャ
- Joined
- Jun 14, 2010
- Location
- Not in the SB ;-;
Believe it or not this is homework, but I like it a lot so I said why not? So if things go well I will continue the story, it may sound weird because its meant to be the intro a movie, but dont worry later it will sound story like
Chapter 1: The Plain
Two men are facing each other in a vast field at the sunset, both holding swords and armed for battle. The wind blows calmly as they both wait; wait to see who will prevail. At the back there is the silhouette of two women; the first woman its standing while the second one is sitting down in the floor playing with what seems to be to little balls of colors, red and blue.
The wind blows once again, and the second lady lets go of the balls; the men begin to fight. They both seem tired and their armors worn off. As their swords clash with others in slow motion, you can see they are not men they are young kids, not more than 17. The first warrior cuts his opponent gravely; the first woman glimpses a little smile. As the second warrior struggles, he lounges with a trust that it’s nimbly dodged by the first; both women show a little sad smile.
The women raise their arms and the kids stop fighting, they get close to them, and whisper something. Both look horrified; the first woman raise their hands and rays of red light is seen from afar making the sun look fierce and intense; the first warrior is gone, he is ashes. The second woman raises his hand and again rays are seen but now they are blue, making the beautiful sunset into a cold night; the second warrior is gone….. in a breeze
-“We failed Kotake” said the first lady, -“This were not whom we are looking for Koume” said the second one. Both walk away from each other and say in synchrony –“We shall meet again soon, sister”. Both show a faint smile and are gone….
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Well its not much of a first chapter, but trust me its goung ot get better, again this sound weired because its meant to be an introduction to a movie
I got chapter 2!!! Enjoy
Chapter 2: A Wicked Melody
"Just get the tools for the gods sake" shouted Mutoh, A big hairy man with some tigered torusers. "Oh come on, Mr.Mutoh" protested Mikau, a small untrained carpenter "You...I mean WE left the them at Mayor Dotour's unfinished garden stable!" Mutoh who didnt liked to be challenged simple picked up Mikau and walked him of to the door.
"Ugh! No wonder why all his carpenters run away from him!" He said as he was pushed away. Mikau not been exactly a focused person got distracted at the market. He got to see rings, weapons, armors, and strange masks from a strange man who couldnt take his eyes away from him. "Odd, man" he thought as everyone who was seeing the masks.
Sligthly remembering his task he wandered closer to Mayor Dotours place, when he saw two musicians conducting a little orchestra. As the music finished the musicians said-"Be very very welcome we come from far of lands, to play our music!" said the first one. "We are Sharp & Flat famous musicians al around the world!" Everybody stood silent, nobody knew who this people were. "Ah, fiddlesticks I told you Flat to not tell our names! Now a huge crowd is going to come! Just look at the aww of this people" Sadly there were no more people, just Mikau.
"Aww, what have we done wrong this time Sharp" questioned Flat. Sharp not being really happy about the incident stood silent, as Mikau wandered away. "I can make more people listen to you" said somebody. Just as Sharp & Flat turned around they saw a skinny man in purple clothes and a bag at least 3 times as bigger as himself. "Oh yeah, just how?" said the brothers in union. The strange man handed them a mask decorated with bells. "Who are you again?" asked Sharp, but there was no answer. Both looked around but found nothing but the postman, delivering a letter inside a violin. Odd, Flat took the card out and read it,-
"Ill make it free for you now, you can pay me later"
The Mask Salesman
"I dont trust this" said Flat, although Sharp was trying on the mask. Clouds surrounded and Sharp started conducting the instruments, without the players. "Brother" said Flat as he touched his brother, but there was no flesh Sharp was ghost. Flat ran for help, but he found everyone dancing, to his brother's music. "Help!" he shouted, a as he tried to take the mask off Sharp. Mikau who was observing all the happened from the corner launched himslef to help. As much as they bith struggled to make everyone stop dancing, they were unable.
Suddenly the music stopped, "Oh my brother we are famous now, dont you see join me and our passion." was hissed of Sharp's mouth. "No brother, this is not music, dont give your soul to this devil your wearing". Sharp and Flat were both now face to face, who knows how, neihter Mikau was able to see what happened. "You come with me". Both brothers were now ghosts. Mikau was speechless, he had never seen such a violent storm surrounding town, and less to ghosts. A ray of light and a red ray came from the sky and earth, Sharp hurried his brother to the red ray, but Mikau rammed on him, although he went through him and got Flat to out of that light.
Flat levitated unconsicious to the next light, and all was gone. Mikau was standing alone, none were danceing anymore, they jsut kept walking as if nothing happened. Mikau was starstruck...
"My ladies are going to be very pleased with the news I got, hehehe"
Chapter 1: The Plain
Two men are facing each other in a vast field at the sunset, both holding swords and armed for battle. The wind blows calmly as they both wait; wait to see who will prevail. At the back there is the silhouette of two women; the first woman its standing while the second one is sitting down in the floor playing with what seems to be to little balls of colors, red and blue.
The wind blows once again, and the second lady lets go of the balls; the men begin to fight. They both seem tired and their armors worn off. As their swords clash with others in slow motion, you can see they are not men they are young kids, not more than 17. The first warrior cuts his opponent gravely; the first woman glimpses a little smile. As the second warrior struggles, he lounges with a trust that it’s nimbly dodged by the first; both women show a little sad smile.
The women raise their arms and the kids stop fighting, they get close to them, and whisper something. Both look horrified; the first woman raise their hands and rays of red light is seen from afar making the sun look fierce and intense; the first warrior is gone, he is ashes. The second woman raises his hand and again rays are seen but now they are blue, making the beautiful sunset into a cold night; the second warrior is gone….. in a breeze
-“We failed Kotake” said the first lady, -“This were not whom we are looking for Koume” said the second one. Both walk away from each other and say in synchrony –“We shall meet again soon, sister”. Both show a faint smile and are gone….
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Well its not much of a first chapter, but trust me its goung ot get better, again this sound weired because its meant to be an introduction to a movie
I got chapter 2!!! Enjoy
Chapter 2: A Wicked Melody
"Just get the tools for the gods sake" shouted Mutoh, A big hairy man with some tigered torusers. "Oh come on, Mr.Mutoh" protested Mikau, a small untrained carpenter "You...I mean WE left the them at Mayor Dotour's unfinished garden stable!" Mutoh who didnt liked to be challenged simple picked up Mikau and walked him of to the door.
"Ugh! No wonder why all his carpenters run away from him!" He said as he was pushed away. Mikau not been exactly a focused person got distracted at the market. He got to see rings, weapons, armors, and strange masks from a strange man who couldnt take his eyes away from him. "Odd, man" he thought as everyone who was seeing the masks.
Sligthly remembering his task he wandered closer to Mayor Dotours place, when he saw two musicians conducting a little orchestra. As the music finished the musicians said-"Be very very welcome we come from far of lands, to play our music!" said the first one. "We are Sharp & Flat famous musicians al around the world!" Everybody stood silent, nobody knew who this people were. "Ah, fiddlesticks I told you Flat to not tell our names! Now a huge crowd is going to come! Just look at the aww of this people" Sadly there were no more people, just Mikau.
"Aww, what have we done wrong this time Sharp" questioned Flat. Sharp not being really happy about the incident stood silent, as Mikau wandered away. "I can make more people listen to you" said somebody. Just as Sharp & Flat turned around they saw a skinny man in purple clothes and a bag at least 3 times as bigger as himself. "Oh yeah, just how?" said the brothers in union. The strange man handed them a mask decorated with bells. "Who are you again?" asked Sharp, but there was no answer. Both looked around but found nothing but the postman, delivering a letter inside a violin. Odd, Flat took the card out and read it,-
"Ill make it free for you now, you can pay me later"
The Mask Salesman
"I dont trust this" said Flat, although Sharp was trying on the mask. Clouds surrounded and Sharp started conducting the instruments, without the players. "Brother" said Flat as he touched his brother, but there was no flesh Sharp was ghost. Flat ran for help, but he found everyone dancing, to his brother's music. "Help!" he shouted, a as he tried to take the mask off Sharp. Mikau who was observing all the happened from the corner launched himslef to help. As much as they bith struggled to make everyone stop dancing, they were unable.
Suddenly the music stopped, "Oh my brother we are famous now, dont you see join me and our passion." was hissed of Sharp's mouth. "No brother, this is not music, dont give your soul to this devil your wearing". Sharp and Flat were both now face to face, who knows how, neihter Mikau was able to see what happened. "You come with me". Both brothers were now ghosts. Mikau was speechless, he had never seen such a violent storm surrounding town, and less to ghosts. A ray of light and a red ray came from the sky and earth, Sharp hurried his brother to the red ray, but Mikau rammed on him, although he went through him and got Flat to out of that light.
Flat levitated unconsicious to the next light, and all was gone. Mikau was standing alone, none were danceing anymore, they jsut kept walking as if nothing happened. Mikau was starstruck...
"My ladies are going to be very pleased with the news I got, hehehe"
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