Still says how much rep they used to have. (No offense, but saying that makes you sound a bit protective (obsessed?) with rep, and I don't want people thinking about you like that. You may want to remove it.)
EDIT: You've changed it, but sadly, not for the better. Saying why you got it makes it worse than it was. I want people to respect you for who you are as a person, not because of pointless rep.