General Art Detonator

[Siniru]

(The character does NOT look like me)

Chapter 1 - A persistent web-pal

It was a luxurious day. Direct sunlight pierced the misty clouds, and Music clearly drifted in waves out of a small house into the warm atmosphere before there was a click and all was silent.
"Ok. Time for me to go." lamented a beautiful girl. She was resting a hand on two diminutive plats on the side of her head, and a haze of copper hair swayed left and right behind her cranium. She looked awkwardly at her friend that ran up to her in sober frenzy, making her feel twice as bad.
"Siniru! Do not leave me!"
Siniru shook her head. “I need to" and walked out of the broad entrance of the building, entering the car parked just by the wall
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The expeditions went well. On the plane, she bought a Hot Chocolate off the flight attendant, and eventually drifted off to unlikely sleep. By the time she got there, it was almost nightfall, the least desired time to arrive. But she did not mind right now. The only thing that was on her mind was reflecting where she was and where to go on the dusty, old map that her grandfather gave her.
She kept walking until she saw a blob in the horizon. Her destination.

It may be a little short, but I am completely zonked out. I will continue tomorrow.

 

[theothernavi]

Not bad. Short, but not bad at all.

 

[xmajorax]

Really short, but very good. Writing is very nice, and there are little grammer and spelling errors. I'll be keeping an eye on this thread.

 

[Siniru]

Starfire-Darkstar-Vamp Sage-Cat teacher-Detonator-Quantum-Amber Victor-Onestar-Rush-Flare

The Fifth adventure in the Starfire saga.

Chapter 2: Tsume
With wind battling her fragile face, she scanned the small village. Time stretched away, and, by the time Siniru was about to walk off, a figure clanked towards her, smothered from head to toe in black and gold armour.
"Hello, Visitor." He said in a low voice. "What brings you to this unfruitful kingdom?"
Siniru Hesitated, wondering about how much to tell him. "I am looking for a girl called Tsume. Seen her?"
The man lifted his mysterious head, and sighed. "I know her. But first, Tell me your name. If you do, I will lead you to her."
Siniru sighed. "Tell me YOUR name first." she snapped, without thinking. She has spoke without hesitating lots of times, But now she is at her undeniable worst.
The mysterious man twitched. "Wow, attitude. My name is Serris. Yours?"
The young girl giggled. "I am Siniru"
Awkward silence.
After quite what seemed like a long time, Serris was the first to speak. "Follow me."
Siniru followed Serris into a miniture porch of a neutral-sized house and knocked. A girl clothed completely in black and grey opened the door and slinked up to them....

Sorry if it is not brilliant, Some days I am better than others

Picture I done -