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I have written a Crusader of Centy for the Sega Genesis and Legend of Zelda A link to the past Crossover and would like a few elements of the story critiqued. None of the characters in this story are original, they are either Zelda Characters, or Crusader of Centy Characters. The story details an instance where the gate to the dark world and light world are reconfigured such that instead of connecting to their proper destinations, they connect to the respective Light and Dark worlds of Soleil, the world from Crusader of Centy. Some elements that I would like looked at:
Corona is initially believed to be a creation of Ganon, by Link and Zelda, even though he is perfectly Human. He does however, have the ability to throw his sword and control where it goes like Ganon does his pike. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ICygI256ukY This is various Corona sword control arts.
The creator of the world of Soleil is a god and goddess couple. When the God of the world of Soleil who looks nothing like Ganon addresses Corona in a court yard of Hyrule Castle in the form of a 12 foot tall Emperor Mateus-looking from soul of rebirth Giant (big angel wings, etc.), Link and Zelda suspect that that Soleil creator may be Ganon creating an illusion. Is this reasonable for their characters to make this leap?
Corona's powers stem from Animal spirits that accompany him from the world of Soleil. (You get 15 in the game but only 12 are permanent.) When Corona goes into the dark world, his animal spirits attempt to defend him from the effects of the curse. The interaction between the two incompatible magics causes Corona to feel tremendous pain for a period, he screams, whails, cries, holds his head and whails on the ground in a seizure like state, parts of his body transform into different animal parts, until they finally adapt and are able to resist the curse.
Would Din, Nayru, and Farore consider Soleil god and goddess a greater threat to Hyrule than even Ganon, as Soliel god and goddess has an entire world of Human armies at his disposal, who could easily tell his Human armies that the Hylians are heretics that must convert or die. If you want to know how vicious the people of Soleil can be here is a video to illustrate. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xq8AiP8HmkY
A Crusader of Centy monster named Maldra (a large dragon with a lightning sword) challenges Ganon, he manages to get into Ganon's pyramid, because he is believed to be working for Ganon. How feasible is this?
Here is a battle of Corona vs. Maldra. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nOdoRBBgyo4
Here is a battle of Link vs Ganon http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZgraxrPYM3U
Corona is initially believed to be a creation of Ganon, by Link and Zelda, even though he is perfectly Human. He does however, have the ability to throw his sword and control where it goes like Ganon does his pike. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ICygI256ukY This is various Corona sword control arts.
The creator of the world of Soleil is a god and goddess couple. When the God of the world of Soleil who looks nothing like Ganon addresses Corona in a court yard of Hyrule Castle in the form of a 12 foot tall Emperor Mateus-looking from soul of rebirth Giant (big angel wings, etc.), Link and Zelda suspect that that Soleil creator may be Ganon creating an illusion. Is this reasonable for their characters to make this leap?
Corona's powers stem from Animal spirits that accompany him from the world of Soleil. (You get 15 in the game but only 12 are permanent.) When Corona goes into the dark world, his animal spirits attempt to defend him from the effects of the curse. The interaction between the two incompatible magics causes Corona to feel tremendous pain for a period, he screams, whails, cries, holds his head and whails on the ground in a seizure like state, parts of his body transform into different animal parts, until they finally adapt and are able to resist the curse.
Would Din, Nayru, and Farore consider Soleil god and goddess a greater threat to Hyrule than even Ganon, as Soliel god and goddess has an entire world of Human armies at his disposal, who could easily tell his Human armies that the Hylians are heretics that must convert or die. If you want to know how vicious the people of Soleil can be here is a video to illustrate. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xq8AiP8HmkY
A Crusader of Centy monster named Maldra (a large dragon with a lightning sword) challenges Ganon, he manages to get into Ganon's pyramid, because he is believed to be working for Ganon. How feasible is this?
Here is a battle of Corona vs. Maldra. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nOdoRBBgyo4
Here is a battle of Link vs Ganon http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZgraxrPYM3U
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