No, I'm just speaking of it in general. At the start of the story when I was reading about them being opposed to each other, I thought at the end of the book they would forgive each other. Looks like this is not the case. :)
...Wow. The master sword huh? Nice.
I've also sometimes noticed spelling errors in the story, but nothing too major. It's never made a difference to the story in full.
Something that would make the story better though is spacing it out a bit more. I quite often lose my place while I'm...
Lovely few chapters, Puss. I always look forward to a new part whenever I come on ZD.
Interesting, I actually never picture things, but I think it would make a great game in TP style now you mention it.