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Wowee! Yay for Atsuma! You proved to everyone that you can finish a story! So there, Everyone! HIP HIP HORAAY! :clap: Well, good job, very well written, didn't see any typos (but again, didn't look for any), you sure got us all drooling for the rest! Great Work! I'll be following this story for...

Oh, ok. Well I'll be looking forwards to the next part. If it ends with a cliffhanger, GRR to you.

Wow, that IS dramatic. I'm practically drooling for more... Good job. Long chapter, though.

I agree with Viper. He has something in mind, that ugly bastard! Well, the Dragirs are there to fight him. Let's hope they win!

Well, it's our pleasure, and I'm sure I speak for all of us. Good luck on the story. :D

Good job, Atsuma. Well written as usual, with a new character coming in. And a very interesting one, I might add.

Well, very good, what more can I say?:P I didn't see any mistakes. Good job. :)

OK, I'll watch out for him/her!

What's your character's name, Epwna? And on who's side is he on? Good job to Atsuma, anyway.

Hey! Nice! I noticed some typos that I'll post here, but very good all the same! ---------- Post added at 01:42 AM ---------- Previous post was at 01:36 AM ---------- her attention to the mage. who was busy tracing out a door pattern. --> A bit of an awkward full stop in the middle of the...

Wow. The pirates has morphed into monsters, and Gannondorf has a very powerful army with him... Things have turned for the worse for the Hylians/Dragirs... Can't wait for the rest, good job.

Well, well. Hazel is being introduced, eh? Interesting... Can't wait. But don't rush it! No need to rush it!

Oh, Athenian's... Ok, then, well good luck on next part!

Well, well, Astuma... Good job. I see you've introduced the furrions... But who's character is Simerus?

Very well written, in this chapter you interpret his feelings really well. But I have a question for you : What's a satchel? :) Wow, sounds like a good idea (the quiz). When it is done, are you going to post a link to the thread here?

Well, well... Good job, Atsuma. I'm anxious for the rest. Continue it that way and you'll have an awesome story done before you know it! Bravo!

So, I'm looking forward to the rest. (I'm posting this here because I know you hate double posts :) JK) So, write quick! I'm sure were half a dozen or more people to be waiting around for this thread. Hope there will be updates today.

Yes, in Rad's story, Tetra is the granddaughter of the King. So technically, the King is Tetra's ancestor...

Well good for you. LOL people don't usually admit being lazy... I'm looking forward to seeing this:)

Good that it's OK. I once commented on an other forum, and landed in a similar situation. The guy who posted the story wasn't as cool as you though and was mad at me for days afterwards. I assume that you will be posting more soon, as you are working on it?

Yeah, I got your point, it just... sounds/looks weird. I personally think. But hey, my opinion is not the one to be most trusted! I just wondered... if it was right or whatever:)

Your story? Brilliant. Keep it up. You're managing to make me drool for the rest even more... Great job. Although I noticed one thing : "That is why he needed the goodly race of the Dragir gone from the face of the world," Shouldn't it be godly? Goodly makes no sense to me.

Interesting... So, Ganondorf has a creature thing too, hasn't he? Like Lady Madusa --> Sleechurs Ganondorf --> ? Lexi is a very interesting character, I think. She's Xinnamin's, no? Anyway... Good job. :)

Brilliant chapter, continue! I am really happy that you're writing this. Your writing's good, also!

Really nice story, Atsuma. Nice intro... It makes us want to read the rest.