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Fantabulous my friend. THough i did find a couple spelling errors. I know you looked for them hard, but when you know the text it is hard to find errors because your head corrects them as you read, making you not see them. lol That is my problem. But You are introducing all your characters...

Wow girl! You really took the feedback I gave you on the last one and applied it! Your thoughts are much more fluid and less broken. I like the entry too! :) But I'm bias on that subject, lol. Fantabulous start off. good job my friend!