I changed the whole script, [lolz.] The story is new, so if you only read about Atsuma falling down, you should go read the prologue and chapter 1, don't worry, they are not very long, in fact, together they don't compare to that chapter 2 you just read.
Nate?... well im not very sure about that. by the way i don't know why Near likes to build cities with gambling dice (like lego lol)... and play with finger puppets...