Thank you for your support. I appreciate that you took the time to read my work.
As for being professional, that is debatable. I actually add a very personal touch to the story. Anemos, as he is depicted in the story, represents my many thoughts and ideas. I'll often tie in mimicry and quotations from things I've been focusing on recently. A good example is the Phantom of the Opera. I listen to it a lot, and I bring it in sometimes. I've also been playing "Force Unleashed" a bit. In the battle between Anemos and Ganondorf in Chapter 4, I made a lot of the "magic" mimic some of the abilities from "Force Unleashed". It's like dreaming, where you take what your brain processed during the day to make a whole world. Except, I'm writing it down.
Chapter 6
[FONT="]Anemos knew that there was a very big problem at that moment. The worst part was that he had broken the ancient laws he had sworn to obey. Link would not have the sword, and he wouldn’t have his powers for the next twenty four hours. [/FONT]
[FONT="]The laws of the Advisory Council of Hyrule stated that “no council member may use an extreme method of offense besides a Hero designated by a royal family member unless the method is necessary to save one’s self from serious permanent injury”. This meant that, unless you were protecting a royal family member or you were about to die, you could not attack with any powerful form of magic. The method Anemos used to defeat the Majora was not called for in these circumstances. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]As for the sword, it would not be hard for him to find it. Very few people, if anybody, would be able to so much as touch that sword, not to mention take it from the pedestal. He already had a theory as to who took it, but he did not voice it as he looked at Link. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“We don’t have much time. Skull Kid sees everyone who goes through here, and probably tried to kill whoever tried to get through here while being visible.” Anemos said. “The act here was not one of evil. That much is certain. We are looking for the Shiekah.”[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]Link looked surprised. He had heard of the Shiekah. They were a group of ninjas that served the Royal Family in ancient times. It was said that they had died out.[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]Anemos knew they didn’t have much time. The Shiekah were not easy to find, and they needed the sword by midnight. If the sword was not in the possession of the Hero by that time…[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]Link looked at Anemos, worried by the sudden silence. Anemos made a gesture, ordering him to be quiet. Anemos was listening, hard. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]It was immediately apparent why Anemos had told Link to be quiet. There was a rumbling, a kind of…movement. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“GET DOWN!” Anemos yelled, and Link did so, not knowing why.[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]Again, Anemos’s actions were easily justifiable. Countless arrows suddenly shot through the air, and they would both be hit had they not ducked. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“I’ll hold them off! Get as far away as possible!” Anemos yelled to Link. [/FONT]
[FONT="]Anemos’s plans were cut short, however, by the appearance of hundreds of knights, aiming their bows directly at Link and Anemos. There was no place to go, and they were trapped. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]Anemos pointed to Link, and he was gone. He turned toward a highly decorated looking knight, who was walking toward him, alone. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“Hiding criminals is against the law, especially when the criminal is wanted for questioning, concerning the disappearance of the Princess.” The knight said.[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]Anemos looked the man in the eyes, and the man withdrew at the sight of the spinning eyes. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“I can see into your mind, your soul, and your dreams. You feel alone and powerless, despite all the power that is given to you…” Anemos said, pausing slightly before he continued. “…Captain.”[/FONT]
[FONT="]The Captain was caught off guard. He had a feeling that this man was dangerous, but he never thought he was some kind of freak. He raised his sword to the man’s neck.[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“You shouldn’t have done that.” Anemos said.[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]The man was suddenly thrown into the air, flying backward until he finally collided with a tree.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Anemos was smiling now. He didn’t usually smile, but this was quite the special occasion. In all Ganon’s great ideas, he forgot that Anemos could draw power from chaos. Thus, the more fear and destruction Ganon caused, the more powerful Anemos would become. He suddenly spoke in a ringing, all encompassing voice, addressing all the knights that had surrounded him. [/FONT]
[FONT="]“Why so silent, good messieurs?” Anemos said.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Suddenly, Anemos seemed to explode. The knights were all tossed haphazardly into the wind, hurtling away from Anemos. The Captain alone remained, held against the tree by Anemos’s magic. [/FONT]
[FONT="]“You’ve met with a terrible fate, haven’t you?” Anemos asked mockingly. “I can do more. I can make you feel pain. I can make you see things that aren’t there. Or I could kill you.”[/FONT]
[FONT="]The Captain had succumbed to tears, sobbing in the air, at Anemos’s mercy. [/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“What do you want from me, demon? I have nothing for you!” The Captain shouted at Anemos[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]Anemos looked regretfully at the man that cowered before him. He held up his hand, and snapped his fingers. [/FONT]
[FONT="]The Captain screamed with pain and terror. A large serpent was coiling around him, squeezing the life out of him. [/FONT]
[FONT="]“WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?!” The Captain screamed at Anemos.[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]The snake answered him in a strange, wispy voice.[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“Anemos want your allegiance to turn to the Princess, and not your new general. He finds it prudent that you do this, for otherwise Hyrule will fall into the wrong hands.”[/FONT]
[FONT="]“How do you know about the General? It hasn’t been stated to the public yet that there is a new general!” The Captain said, confusedly. [/FONT]
[FONT="]The snake’s grip was starting to slacken, yet it held tight. It answered him.[/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]“Anemos is very intolerant when it comes to the General. Let us just say that General Onox and Anemos are, for lack of a better term, old friends.”[/FONT]