General Art Violet's Hall of Poetry.

[Violet Link]

So... I've been doing a lot of poetry to ease out my feelings. It's therapeutic, so why not. Most of the themes of my poetry would be more into darker themes, some are deep, some are just plain normal.

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when she heard the melody
she twirled and twirled
gracefully, breathlessly
being in her own world

but she never knew
all the invisible strings
making false blessings
were all from the melody
that secretly crossed
her line of boundary

so the ballerina girl
kept dancing
even it was aching
she'd never stop to twirl
as she kept dancing
the melody kept deceiving

until
an ugly tune played out
and without a doubt
the ballerina stopped
the mask of fallacy broken
and frankly
all she saw
was a banshee
begging in plea​

 

[Azure Sage]

I really like this poem. It's about abusive relationships, right? It's really well-written. I'm not really good at critiquing poetry, but it's very good. Good word choice. I like it a lot. c:

 

[Jirohnagi]

I am not a master or Poetry heck i barely understand it sometimes but i like this ^^ it speaks volumes, it truly does. It shows the darker period of the poets life quite nicely. But remember for each dark poem you need a light one ^^ it helps to balance the gloom. And also I like it a lot.

 

[Violet Link]

Thank you for your feedback <3 I'm also accepting criticism, so if anyone wants to do that, I'll be happy to hear it.

Here's a poem about getting ideas.

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as the moon glows eerily
her thoughts began to wander
and began acts of transparency
all was in plain yonder

all her walking nightmares
had been relieved, solaced,
everything became little dreams
overthrowing nightmarish regimes

her thoughts flickered
like stars, sparkling lights
all of herself ignites
and with a blast,
she was soaring at last.
​

 

[27ジョーカーソン]

It's simple, but i really like how you write it talking about "her". It gives it a very specific feel and makes it very powerful in a way. Really beautiful

 

[Azure Sage]

I really like this one, especially the last stanza! I really like the words you choose for your poems. Nice work, sis!

 

[Violet Link]

A new one.

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Reassurance
There she stood,
Being silent and brood

But a sentence, a phrase
That was intentionally directed to her place
It was her panacea, her resolve

Feelings scattering,
Hearts fluttering
The bitterness vanished,
And she was absolutely astonished

The girl wasn't woebegone, luckily
Her little thoughts opened,
And she was able to smile so happily.​

 

[Violet Link]

contains suicide mention:

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noises of threat, noises of sorrow,
will all of my efforts be worthwhile tomorrow?

with my feet walking to the flight of stairs
let there be a voice screaming that cares

waiting, and waiting, i stood at the top
my memories and laughter came to a stop

the little string was about to be cut
so i readied myself, eyes shut


my shivering heart jumped around,
and there came a thump, without a sound.

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the answers to questions,
or the answers to your path,
lies to the experts;
so don’t fret, there won’t be any frustrations


the experts consist of many,
as every each of us had experienced,
something,
its all a job that all had carry,
so every each of us is never nothing


the starry skies up above,
at the calming, dark lit dusk,
constellations are ones of many experts,
since from the beginning, they had always formed,
replying to all answers, being honest and true,
so in the end, you happiness shan’t end, in fake blue.

• starlit wishes, on 140215|0842. // a.a