General Art Vee's Poems

[Vanessa28]

Sometimes the weirdest things pop into my head. This is a silly poem about a bottle and why the bottle is on a certain place.

Bottle at the shore

The bottle on the shore
Could tell us oh so much
Where it has been before
Who's hands made the final touch

On a white sunny beach
It waits to be picked up
But who's going to teach
The youth to watch and stop

The bottle made of glass
Could have travelled from far
Was it just dropped fast
Or once belong to a bar

Now if bottles could talk
They could tell us many stories
More then just a walk
Or maybe give us some worries

Nobody can tell us why
The bottle ended on the sand
Did it make someone cry
After the message reached the hand

A bottle hits a head
A bottle tossed in the sea
A prize at a bet
The message has been set free



Sound of Silence:

Silence is better than gold
It is something to cherish and to hold
Lot of people should try it for one time
Endless thoughts will vanish in this rhyme
Nothing can be anything if you let it in
Care about yourself and free that mind's trash bin
Energy will renew you when you enjoy the silence

 

[Moonstone]

The message in the bottle: "Please recycle me." =p

I liked both of these. Please post more.

 

[the_miserable]

Good job on these! i really do enjoy your rhyme. I am rather impressed and really enjoy these. Thanks for sharing them. C:

 

[Vanessa28]

Thank you I sometimes have poems popping up out of the blue and then I must write it down.

Starry Starry Night:
Starry Starry Night
Your stars shine so bright

Where have they been
And keep me in the mood I'm in

Lights of planes, lights of stars
Always shine in time of peace and time of many wars

Laying on our backs watching the dark sky
Seeing all kinds of shapes and patterns passing by

Painters paint these starry wonder
Always coming back even with rain and thunder

Sometimes I wonder if I could name a star
And recognize it even from this far

But far away and still close at night
These stars on the starry starry night

 

[the_miserable]

Another great job. I love this, it flows very well. Keep up the awesome work.

 

[sailormars109]

I love the flow and the truth behind it. I also am a sucker for a good rhyme.

 

[Stitch]

This is some amazing stuff^^ I should really start my own poetry thread, but it would be nothing compared to this...

 

[Vanessa28]

This is some amazing stuff^^ I should really start my own poetry thread, but it would be nothing compared to this...

Who says you don't? Maybe you can write way better than I ever could do

Darkness:

What is Darkness
Is it like a fog
Slowly moving on to you
Like a misty cloud
Making you feel scared
Or uncomfortable perhaps

Is it really bad
After all the night is dark too
Is Darkness a sign of evil
Or is it something we were told to fear
But without Darkness
Light can't exist either

On a dark night
I always sleep very well
The signs we are suppose to fear
Are not that scary at all
In fact it can be shapes
Of beloved ones watching oiver us

So we face many facts of Darkness
The evil being, the dark faul deeds
But also the sun going down
And the light of the moon
Shows through our windows
Making us feel less afraid of the dark

But the evil minds of people
Planning to do their faul deeds
Will shine another light on Darkness
But as long as we hold on
And know that we're not afraid
Darkness can be something beautiful

 

[Fig]

I love all your poems Momma! Each theme just sparks a fire in my heart with your beautiful words and phrases! Keep up the amazing and beautiful poems Momma! I might actually start writing some of my own poems in the near future thanks to you! ^^

 

[Vanessa28]

Gees I can't be out of inspiration can I? Nope indeed so here is another one.

The journey of a Fish:
Little Fish so young and all alone
Where will you be or are you gone
Away from home, miles apart
Swimming around, a life so hard

A tough journey ahead of you
But your instincts tell you where you're going to
Enemies come and enemies go
Will they catch you, we'll never know

Though you might be small and weak
It's not power that you seek
To survive and multiply
Is your destination and that's no lie

But still we're waiting on the shore
To catch you again once more
I hope you have filled your little belly
Because after eating you I'm watching the telly

 

[Mamono101]

These are great Vee! I really enjoyed reading these. ^^

 

[Fig]

Nice poem Momma! It's been a while since you last made one. I really did enjoy the simplicity of your poem. Nonetheless I am happy to see a new poem from you Momma. ^^

 

[Vanessa28]

To my mother who is dying
Your eyes so bright
Your face so pale
I look in the light
Scream, shout, yell if you will

Your life was tough
Your will was strong
Your words were rough
Your right was right your wrong was wrong

A long journey you had my dear
Sweet and challenging days
But nothing could break you so severe
Because you always found new ways

You never had an easy life
Everything always seemed to be your bad luck
An abusive husband to a mother and wife
There was always lightning that struck

Now I look at your sleeping face
Knowing you won't wake up anymore
Ahead of me are tough and hard days
But you'll always be the one I adore

I love you mom and I always will