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General Art Poems from a Monolith

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IDK about that title. I'll figure out a better one later.

So yes! I'm starting a portry/song thread. Yay. I songwrite like crazy, and need to get back into poetry. Inspired by my friend the_miserable, I'm doing just that. So let's see how well this works.

This first one... I just kind of wrote.


Discarded~

Strike, slash, cut, bleed
Pain; the natural red release
Question my reality
Wandering a hopeless dream

Gold, blue, white, green
Autumn fades to winer's freeze
Fallen for a fiery scream
Tricked by passion's lying wheeze

Stretch, break, crush, squeeze
Tortures counted, utmost ease
Beg and plead but none will hear
Longing for precious reprive

Born, died, twenty-three
Romance was a cool deceit
Fragile blades, the piercing sleet
Snapping echo, memory



No spoilers because mobile hates spoilers.

Welp, that was probably way more depressing than it should have been. Okay then, self.
 
Joined
Jun 22, 2013
OH! this is cool. the rhyming seems a bit forced in here for my liking, but overall a nice flow. and that wasn't that depressing. :P. No, i really liked that though. I am glad to get you out and posting these.
 

TatlTails

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Jan 14, 2013
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...Wow. So much deep poetry. I... don't think I could ever write something like that. Maybe I'm lucky, maybe I'm unlucky, but dang that was good.
 

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