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Mikey the Moblin

sushi is a suspicious hello
Joined
Aug 31, 2014
Location
southworst united states
Gender
Dude
Attempting to write a romance scene. I am hampered by the fact that I don't know how the piss people talk to each other, and I've rewritten the same passage five or six times trying to edit it into something good.

Should probably just move on and fix it when I'm in editor mode, tbh.
all I've got is embrace the cheese
I don't think it's humanly possible to write romantic interaction in a way that doesn't come off at least slightly cringeworthy, so just accept that it'll sound terrible when you write it and people reading it will accept it the way it is

edit: heck, I don't think it's humanly possible to write any interaction that doesn't come across as cheesy
 

accio boomerang

you've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?
Joined
Feb 22, 2021
Gender
Female
Right now I am resting, I'm hoping that if I rest I won't get any side effects of the vaccine. I may watch some anime later.
 

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