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Zelda Art The Untitled Story of Link ! (PG-13)

kindlyone

I am The Kindlyone
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Lake Hylia with the scarecrow dudes
Hey guys this story is a little off course of zelda stuff but i use names and charecters a lot in this so i guess its zelda :)

Chapter I

ughhhhh....... i wake up in some strangers house ... and her bed. I try to get up without any noise but of course her dog is very excited to see me.

Shut up stupid dog, I whisper, but its too late she is up.

Where are you going Link?

I have to go back home. I say this while putting on my bright green tunic.

Just stay for breakfast, she says seductively.

Sorry i have to go.

Holy crap! Who was that? I say to myself as i walk down the street.
I don't even know where i am. As i look around i realize that i can't even remember last night. S*** where's my sword? I sit down and think to retrace my steps so i awkwardly turn around back to the one girls house.

I felt the heat before i saw it. The entire house was on fire! Confused as possible i see a crowd start to gather but the people were all children in green. They all were either crying, screaming, or pouring buckets of water on the pyre. I run up to the one who looks like he is running this rescue attempt. What happened?

Who are you! He turns around with a dagger already put up to my throat.

L-Link my n-name is Link! I say stuttering.

What are you doing here? he yells over the voices which have risen to an ear splitting roar of sadness and regret. The dagger now is against my throat one quick flick of the wrist and im dead.

I decide to lie.
I got lost. Trying to sound confident.

He buys it and yells to two soldiers. Get over here! I didn't even notice the armor clad men assembling near this whole disaster.

General Mido Sir! one of them replies.

Bring this man to the prison then we will decide what to do with him.


End of chapter one.
hey guys did you like it? Feel free to comment and can anyone guess who that girl was? :)

Also this chapter is going to be shorter than other ones it was an introductory to give you guys a feel for my writing style.
 

Cel-Shaded Deku

Ha ha, charade you are!
Joined
Jul 24, 2010
Location
Rapin' your churches, burnin' your women!
Good job, but I immediately noticed you didn't use quotation marks.


Shut up stupid dog, I whisper, but its too late she is up.

Where are you going Link?

I have to go back home. I say this while putting on my bright green tunic.

Just stay for breakfast, she says seductively.

Sorry i have to go.

Holy crap! Who was that? I say to myself as i walk down the street.
"Shut up stupid dog", I whisper, but its too late she is up.

"Where are you going Link?"

"I have to go back home." I say this while putting on my bright green tunic.

"Just stay for breakfast", she says seductively.

"Sorry i have to go."

"Holy crap! Who was that?" I say to myself as i walk down the street.
 

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