Burning Beast
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Hey everybody! Beast- You know who I am and my username is SO long. That was a mistake when choosing it. Oh well. I digress.
The thing that brings me here today is, well, what's in the title. That's right I'm posting my Fanfiction fic up on here as well as fanfiction. (I hope that's okay.) NOTE: It said I couldn't post without selecting a prefix. I'm not sure this qualifies as art but ZeldaArt was the closed thing to the truth so...
Anyway here's the first chapter. Sorry about the poor writing job, the second chapter I addressed that problem and fixed it so it won't be such a big deal. Feel free to comment on it. I'd love to hear from you guys what you think.
Legend of Zelda: The Shadows of Amn
Chapter 1: The Adventure Begins
A cool breeze whipped through the tall grasses of Hyrule Field, and a warm noon sun shone brightly down on a lone figure jogging through towards it's destination. The figure was a clad in a green tunic and wore a matching green stocking cap. He was armed with a sword and carried it with a shield strapped to his back.
His destination? The tall spires of a Castle stood in the distance and with a smile the young man quickened his pace, 'Mustn't keep the princess waiting!' he thought to himself.
Castle Town. As always buzzing with life and the noise of a happy people. Link always enjoyed coming here and checking out the various shops and other things the market had to offer, but now was not the time for idling away time, Link had been summoned here by Princess Zelda's own personal body guard, Impa, and from what Impa had been able to tell him, there was something seriously wrong, Link just had to find out what.
Weaving through the crowds of people he made his way to the path that lead to the castle, smiling as he remembered the first time he had come this way, back when he was a young lad of about 10 years old, just when he'd started his quest to defeat-. No he didn't want to think of that now. That was in the past and he needed to focus on the present, and future, and that meant meeting with Princess Zelda and finding out what exactly was going on.
He came to the gate where he was hailed by the guard, "Hey Link!" the guard Erickson was his name said, "Hello Erickson," returned Link, "I've been summoned by Princess Zelda on official business, would you be kind enough to let me pass?" Erickson flashed Link a devious smile, "Oh ho, summoned by the Princess on 'official' business, eh? I shouldn't wonder what that might be." Link glared at him, clearing his throat Erickson straightened his expression, "Er, right the gate." He called loudly, "OI! Camrin! Open the gate!" there was a short pause and the gates slid open, Erickson flashed a quick grin at Link, "Good luck." Link rolled his eyes and walked past the snickering guard, 'the big goof, who does he think he is butting into my personal business? Ah but oh well, I guess he probably means well.' Banishing his thoughts of the solider from his mind, Link again turned his thoughts to Zelda and why he had been summoned and quickened his pace a little bit. Hurrying along the path he soon came to the Castle drawbridge, crossing over he entered the Castle.
He entered Zelda's throne room through the great golden doors with various jewels and precious stones carved into them, despite the fact that she went by the title 'Princess' she was still ruler of Hyrule, and as such she held a substantial amount of power. The throne room was large, and there were a good amount of guards placed throughout it, the walls and ceiling were made of grey squared stones piled one on top of the other, with multiple large windows on the walls of each side of the room. Each window had red curtains that could cover them if the occasion called for it but usually, like now they were drawn open. As Link gazed around the elaborately decorated room his eyes fell upon the person sitting in the chair across from him. He smiled flashing his brilliant white teeth as he did so. Zelda, Crown Princess of Hyrule.
He walked slowly towards her, his steps echoing through the massive stone room, coming to stop a few feet from the steps leading up to her throne. He knelt down on one knee and bowed, looking up and flashing another smile, this time flashing her a wink. The princess smiled albeit some what shyly, and stood, her voice echoing through the halls, "Rise Link, you needn't bow here." the Hero rose and stood in his normal pose, waiting for the Princess to begin. "Let us talk elsewhere, the matter of which I must speak to is of the utmost importance." Link nodded gravely and followed the Princess as she hurriedly exited the chamber.
Shortly thereafter they arrived at Zelda's private garden. This is where it had all began, where Link had first met the Princess and his adventures had ALL began. Zelda sat down on a stone bench and closed her eyes exhaling softly and turning her head from Link and looking towards the ground. When she didn't say anything Link slowly sat down next to her, concern showing in his eyes, when more silence followed Link cleared his throat, Zelda looked up at him a pained expression on her face, Link was slightly taken aback by this, "Link," began Zelda, "I'm... I'm not sure how to put this exactly, I prayed to the goddesses that we would be able to live the rest of our lives in peace." Link motioned for her to continue, "It seems that for now, my prayers, at least for me, have been answered with their favor..." she bit her lip, "But... it is the desire of the goddesses that you again take up your sword to defend those in need, but not in Hyrule." the last words caused Link's heart to quicken, not Hyrule, where then? Unless... Zelda began to speak again and his mouth ran dry, "You know of them, the other dimensions, of Termina? Yes you've been there." Oh yes, Link had been to Termina, he had spent countless... months? Yes months reliving the same three days over and over, trying to save the doomed world from a falling moon and the demonic mask: Majora. So many lives had been effected and so many lost, if only he had been able to act faster, but once Majora had been defeated he had been unable to return to the first day. He had failed so many people. Zelda watched the expression on his face carefully, Link cleared his throat and looked at her, "Why do you bring that up?" he asked, "I'm sorry Link," Zelda said, "There is another world, Faerun, in that world there is a city, Amn, it has begun falling to evil, there was someone chosen to save it, but he has fallen, dead or turned to evil... we do not know, but what I do know is the goddesses have decided that you must go and save the city and surrounding lands instead, the choice however as to whether you will go or not, falls to you, they will not force you to go." Link covered his face in his hands, his elbows resting on his legs, he spoke though his voice was somewhat muffled by his hands, "By Din... now? When will they be satisfied? I've done so much already!" Zelda placed a hand on his shoulder and whispered, "I'm sorry Link I truly am, you've been through so much already, you've lived a life of horrors that spared the rest of us of living the same, and you saved Termina as well, but another land in danger now. Let me know of your decision, I will leave you think it over." with those words the princess rose and left.
Once alone, Link stood and walked over to the small pond in the corner of the garden, gazing down into the waters seeing his reflection gazing back up at him, 'I have earned the right to spend the remainder of my days in peace, but that doesn't mean that I should just yet, as a hero my work really is never finished, besides, there really isn't any reason not to, except, I'm afraid, and fear does not favor the hero, I must do this, I must conquer my fear... but I will not forget those I failed.' Smiling slightly, he said a quick prayer to Nayru, for showing him the path he should take and ran off to find Zelda and tell her of his decision.
It had been decided, that night Link would enter the dimension gate and travel to Amn, while he prepared for his journey, Zelda and many other magicians were working on getting the exact and proper coordinates into the gate so he would be transported to Amn properly, he glanced at the items he had laid on the table before him, a pack with some food and water, also some Lon Lon Milk and a few potions, his sword and shield (not the Master Sword), his long shot, a few bombs, and a chain mail shirt to go under his tunic. He grunted and slid the shirt over his head then put on his tunic, strapped on the sword and shield, and put on his pack. Just as he was sliding on his boots, there came a knock at the door, "Yes?" Link called, the door creaked open and a servant dressed in some flowing purple robes entered, "It is time mi'lord." he said, Link nodded in acknowledgment and followed the servant out of the room, they walked through many different halls, down staircases and through more halls until finally they came to a dead end, Link looked on somewhat puzzled as the servant pressed a hidden button on the wall and the dead end wall slid to the side revealing a secret passage, "Follow me sir." Link nodded and followed the servant who, once Link and he were inside pressed another switch sealing them in again, they proceeded, guided by a lantern that was hanging from the wall that the servant took down, they continued walking for roughly five minutes steadily descending down lower into the ground before taking a sharp left turn and entered a massive chamber. The room was lit by many different torches, in the center of the room there stood a large stone archway, hooded figures carved into it, so on both sides of the gate, for that is what it was, looked like grim reapers, and a feeling of foreboding creeped up Link's spine. Zelda was there with ten other people, all chanting, besides Zelda, who motioned for Link to join them by the gate. He cautiously moved towards them, not sure he liked the whole set up, Zelda giggled when she saw his trepidation, "Don't worry silly it's perfectly safe." Link smiled sheepishly at her and moved towards them at a more relaxed yet faster pace. He walked up the stone steps leading to the gateway, stopping just outside the swirling mists held in by the gate, glowing with a otherworldly light. "Are you ready to proceed?" asked Zelda behind him, Link turned around and gazed at her, "Yes." Zelda nodded sadly, "Then step into the mists, and be transported to Amn." Link and Zelda gazed into each others eyes for a long moment, his eyes begging her to just say one word to make him stop to make him stay, then, Link turned on his heel and entered the gate. He immediately felt a force sort of pulling at him, it was weak at first but quickly grew stronger, it was then Zelda said something that made his blood run cold and his heart stop, "Link, I'm sorry I didn't say this earlier, but I knew you wouldn't do it if you knew, there is a high probability you will be unable to return to Hyrule." He turned around, it was difficult as now the gates pulling strength was extremely great, he looked at her with a shocked and pained expression, a tear slipped down Zelda's cheek, "I'm sorry Link." And then he was sucked in by the gate, and all went black.
So... what'd you tink? Was it good or bad? Or inbetween? I can promise you the next chapter is a TON better so... yeah. Thanks for reading.
AND PLEASE REVIEW!
Oh! And this story is PG-13.
The thing that brings me here today is, well, what's in the title. That's right I'm posting my Fanfiction fic up on here as well as fanfiction. (I hope that's okay.) NOTE: It said I couldn't post without selecting a prefix. I'm not sure this qualifies as art but ZeldaArt was the closed thing to the truth so...
Anyway here's the first chapter. Sorry about the poor writing job, the second chapter I addressed that problem and fixed it so it won't be such a big deal. Feel free to comment on it. I'd love to hear from you guys what you think.
Legend of Zelda: The Shadows of Amn
Chapter 1: The Adventure Begins
A cool breeze whipped through the tall grasses of Hyrule Field, and a warm noon sun shone brightly down on a lone figure jogging through towards it's destination. The figure was a clad in a green tunic and wore a matching green stocking cap. He was armed with a sword and carried it with a shield strapped to his back.
His destination? The tall spires of a Castle stood in the distance and with a smile the young man quickened his pace, 'Mustn't keep the princess waiting!' he thought to himself.
Castle Town. As always buzzing with life and the noise of a happy people. Link always enjoyed coming here and checking out the various shops and other things the market had to offer, but now was not the time for idling away time, Link had been summoned here by Princess Zelda's own personal body guard, Impa, and from what Impa had been able to tell him, there was something seriously wrong, Link just had to find out what.
Weaving through the crowds of people he made his way to the path that lead to the castle, smiling as he remembered the first time he had come this way, back when he was a young lad of about 10 years old, just when he'd started his quest to defeat-. No he didn't want to think of that now. That was in the past and he needed to focus on the present, and future, and that meant meeting with Princess Zelda and finding out what exactly was going on.
He came to the gate where he was hailed by the guard, "Hey Link!" the guard Erickson was his name said, "Hello Erickson," returned Link, "I've been summoned by Princess Zelda on official business, would you be kind enough to let me pass?" Erickson flashed Link a devious smile, "Oh ho, summoned by the Princess on 'official' business, eh? I shouldn't wonder what that might be." Link glared at him, clearing his throat Erickson straightened his expression, "Er, right the gate." He called loudly, "OI! Camrin! Open the gate!" there was a short pause and the gates slid open, Erickson flashed a quick grin at Link, "Good luck." Link rolled his eyes and walked past the snickering guard, 'the big goof, who does he think he is butting into my personal business? Ah but oh well, I guess he probably means well.' Banishing his thoughts of the solider from his mind, Link again turned his thoughts to Zelda and why he had been summoned and quickened his pace a little bit. Hurrying along the path he soon came to the Castle drawbridge, crossing over he entered the Castle.
He entered Zelda's throne room through the great golden doors with various jewels and precious stones carved into them, despite the fact that she went by the title 'Princess' she was still ruler of Hyrule, and as such she held a substantial amount of power. The throne room was large, and there were a good amount of guards placed throughout it, the walls and ceiling were made of grey squared stones piled one on top of the other, with multiple large windows on the walls of each side of the room. Each window had red curtains that could cover them if the occasion called for it but usually, like now they were drawn open. As Link gazed around the elaborately decorated room his eyes fell upon the person sitting in the chair across from him. He smiled flashing his brilliant white teeth as he did so. Zelda, Crown Princess of Hyrule.
He walked slowly towards her, his steps echoing through the massive stone room, coming to stop a few feet from the steps leading up to her throne. He knelt down on one knee and bowed, looking up and flashing another smile, this time flashing her a wink. The princess smiled albeit some what shyly, and stood, her voice echoing through the halls, "Rise Link, you needn't bow here." the Hero rose and stood in his normal pose, waiting for the Princess to begin. "Let us talk elsewhere, the matter of which I must speak to is of the utmost importance." Link nodded gravely and followed the Princess as she hurriedly exited the chamber.
Shortly thereafter they arrived at Zelda's private garden. This is where it had all began, where Link had first met the Princess and his adventures had ALL began. Zelda sat down on a stone bench and closed her eyes exhaling softly and turning her head from Link and looking towards the ground. When she didn't say anything Link slowly sat down next to her, concern showing in his eyes, when more silence followed Link cleared his throat, Zelda looked up at him a pained expression on her face, Link was slightly taken aback by this, "Link," began Zelda, "I'm... I'm not sure how to put this exactly, I prayed to the goddesses that we would be able to live the rest of our lives in peace." Link motioned for her to continue, "It seems that for now, my prayers, at least for me, have been answered with their favor..." she bit her lip, "But... it is the desire of the goddesses that you again take up your sword to defend those in need, but not in Hyrule." the last words caused Link's heart to quicken, not Hyrule, where then? Unless... Zelda began to speak again and his mouth ran dry, "You know of them, the other dimensions, of Termina? Yes you've been there." Oh yes, Link had been to Termina, he had spent countless... months? Yes months reliving the same three days over and over, trying to save the doomed world from a falling moon and the demonic mask: Majora. So many lives had been effected and so many lost, if only he had been able to act faster, but once Majora had been defeated he had been unable to return to the first day. He had failed so many people. Zelda watched the expression on his face carefully, Link cleared his throat and looked at her, "Why do you bring that up?" he asked, "I'm sorry Link," Zelda said, "There is another world, Faerun, in that world there is a city, Amn, it has begun falling to evil, there was someone chosen to save it, but he has fallen, dead or turned to evil... we do not know, but what I do know is the goddesses have decided that you must go and save the city and surrounding lands instead, the choice however as to whether you will go or not, falls to you, they will not force you to go." Link covered his face in his hands, his elbows resting on his legs, he spoke though his voice was somewhat muffled by his hands, "By Din... now? When will they be satisfied? I've done so much already!" Zelda placed a hand on his shoulder and whispered, "I'm sorry Link I truly am, you've been through so much already, you've lived a life of horrors that spared the rest of us of living the same, and you saved Termina as well, but another land in danger now. Let me know of your decision, I will leave you think it over." with those words the princess rose and left.
Once alone, Link stood and walked over to the small pond in the corner of the garden, gazing down into the waters seeing his reflection gazing back up at him, 'I have earned the right to spend the remainder of my days in peace, but that doesn't mean that I should just yet, as a hero my work really is never finished, besides, there really isn't any reason not to, except, I'm afraid, and fear does not favor the hero, I must do this, I must conquer my fear... but I will not forget those I failed.' Smiling slightly, he said a quick prayer to Nayru, for showing him the path he should take and ran off to find Zelda and tell her of his decision.
It had been decided, that night Link would enter the dimension gate and travel to Amn, while he prepared for his journey, Zelda and many other magicians were working on getting the exact and proper coordinates into the gate so he would be transported to Amn properly, he glanced at the items he had laid on the table before him, a pack with some food and water, also some Lon Lon Milk and a few potions, his sword and shield (not the Master Sword), his long shot, a few bombs, and a chain mail shirt to go under his tunic. He grunted and slid the shirt over his head then put on his tunic, strapped on the sword and shield, and put on his pack. Just as he was sliding on his boots, there came a knock at the door, "Yes?" Link called, the door creaked open and a servant dressed in some flowing purple robes entered, "It is time mi'lord." he said, Link nodded in acknowledgment and followed the servant out of the room, they walked through many different halls, down staircases and through more halls until finally they came to a dead end, Link looked on somewhat puzzled as the servant pressed a hidden button on the wall and the dead end wall slid to the side revealing a secret passage, "Follow me sir." Link nodded and followed the servant who, once Link and he were inside pressed another switch sealing them in again, they proceeded, guided by a lantern that was hanging from the wall that the servant took down, they continued walking for roughly five minutes steadily descending down lower into the ground before taking a sharp left turn and entered a massive chamber. The room was lit by many different torches, in the center of the room there stood a large stone archway, hooded figures carved into it, so on both sides of the gate, for that is what it was, looked like grim reapers, and a feeling of foreboding creeped up Link's spine. Zelda was there with ten other people, all chanting, besides Zelda, who motioned for Link to join them by the gate. He cautiously moved towards them, not sure he liked the whole set up, Zelda giggled when she saw his trepidation, "Don't worry silly it's perfectly safe." Link smiled sheepishly at her and moved towards them at a more relaxed yet faster pace. He walked up the stone steps leading to the gateway, stopping just outside the swirling mists held in by the gate, glowing with a otherworldly light. "Are you ready to proceed?" asked Zelda behind him, Link turned around and gazed at her, "Yes." Zelda nodded sadly, "Then step into the mists, and be transported to Amn." Link and Zelda gazed into each others eyes for a long moment, his eyes begging her to just say one word to make him stop to make him stay, then, Link turned on his heel and entered the gate. He immediately felt a force sort of pulling at him, it was weak at first but quickly grew stronger, it was then Zelda said something that made his blood run cold and his heart stop, "Link, I'm sorry I didn't say this earlier, but I knew you wouldn't do it if you knew, there is a high probability you will be unable to return to Hyrule." He turned around, it was difficult as now the gates pulling strength was extremely great, he looked at her with a shocked and pained expression, a tear slipped down Zelda's cheek, "I'm sorry Link." And then he was sucked in by the gate, and all went black.
So... what'd you tink? Was it good or bad? Or inbetween? I can promise you the next chapter is a TON better so... yeah. Thanks for reading.
AND PLEASE REVIEW!
Oh! And this story is PG-13.
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