Spectacular Spider-man Episode 1

[ArmanaTheCustos]

hey everyone over the past week I've been writing A spiderman script and I just finished it, any feedback you have would be greatly appreciated

Here's the link:

Spectacular Spider-Man

INT. DOC OCK’S LAB- TIME UNKNOWN Sounds OF Fighting Can Be Heard In The Background Before Spider-Man Gets Slammed Into A Machine Holding A Robotic Tentacle. SPIDER-MAN I Bet You’re Wondering What’s Going On Spider-man Pushes The Tentacle Away Far Enough To Slip Out Of The Machine And Flips Over A...

docs.google.com

 

[Dizzi]

Its hard to read in the google docs next line is in the middle of a word...and gave me a headache but its good...

 

[ArmanaTheCustos]

Alright I fixed the issue I think, there's still some minor things I need to fix. I mad the script in a different program then transferred it to google docs