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Woyogoyo

The Oncoming Storm
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(( Hello everybody. I like to think that I'm a decent writer, but I have a problem. I can never seem to finish my fanfics because I come up with another idea that I have to write down, and it's too difficult for me to keep them both up. So I had an idea. This. Basically, this fanfic is going to be me writing whatever I feel like when I'm writing and then tying it all together somehow. So, without further ado, I shalt begin my epic quest to actually finish a fanfic.))

This contains spoilers of ALBW.
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RAVIO

I love rabbits. Rabbits are survivors. Rabbits know when to run. That's a problem I have. I don't seem to know when to give up and run away. My name is Ravio, and I must be insane. Actually, never mind. I most certainly am insane. Why else would I be standing up to Hilda like this?

" So, begging your pardon Princess Zelda, but would you mind if I intervene here?"

I turn to Hilda. " Your Royal Highness-"

" You vanish on me and then come crawling back?! Why?!"

I wince. I suppose I deserved that. After all, we have known each other since childhood. In the months before Hilda hatched this crazy scheme of hers with Yuga, maybe we were something more. I don't know. Me dumb male. Me no understand female mind. I've understood her even less since she started plotting.

I just don't get it. If there's anything life in Lorule should teach you, it's that you need to work to attain happiness. Princess Hilda is waiting for my response. Not the Hilda I knew, or thought I did. No. This is the princess, her red eyes blazing and her staff tapping on the floor to show her impatience.

" Forgive me, Your Highness, I'm a coward at heart. There was no way I had the courage to stand up to you and Yuga. But I was smart enough to go to Hyrule. I knew they'd have a hero who could help me."

That's right. At least I ran away to a world where there was someone else to do the work. I smile bitterly.

" Another betrayal?! This hero has proven useful to me, but you-! You wanted him to defeat me?!"

Actually, no. In my imagination, I pictured him doing all of the work and then, we you two started fighting him, he'd reason with you and basically do everything I failed to do. But I don't think it would be a good idea to say that.

" I-I'm sorry, My Princess, but it was with the best of intentions." I pause for a moment, trying to put my thoughts on the subject in to relatively diplomatic words. " I wish the best for our kingdom, but by ruining Hyrule...? You'd bring out the absolute worst in Lorule."

Hilda glares at me with Royal Wrath in her eyes.

" You'd rather see Lorule crumble?!"

I shake my head. " No, no, of course not, Princess. But there must be some other way."

Hilda looks sad now. " No..."

A weakness! Now, I just need to exploit it.

" Don't you realize? The reason your ancestors destroyed our Triforce was to STOP such chaos!"

I've nearly gotten through her defenses. Her protests are getting weaker. I doubt her diplomatic training prepared her for a situation like this. She can't rely on ready-made answers when the enemy pierces through.

" That's not what I..." I prepare for the finishing blow. " Look around you! this is EXACTLY what happened with our Triforce!"

Shocked realization spreads across her face. I relax slightly. Victory is assured now.

" Oh no." " Princess Hilda, I..."

It would be really funny if I said"I love you", but I don't think I should do that. " I just wanted to save you from all this-you, who've worried endlessly about the fate of Lorule. Please, Princess Hilda, let's do the right thing. Lorule may be doomed, but at least our kingdom won't be condemned for stealing their Triforce."

Checkmate. Now, I've provided an official excuse for her. It's for diplomatic relations. After all, we couldn't have good relations with other kingdoms if we were known as thieves. It has absolutely nothing to do with the fact that the plan was crazy and evil.

" You're right." She turns to the other Princess. " Princess Zelda, I have been led astray, tempted by the power of your Triforce. But I swear I did it for my people."

Link and Princess Zelda have just been standing there the entire time. Princess Zelda speaks up.

" Please, Princess Hilda, there is no need to-"

" No please, let me finish. You are so fortunate to have a hero like Link."

If I hadn't broken her defenses already, this probably would have started a new plot to kidnap Link.

" What courage he has displayed! That alone proves that Hyrule deserves its Triforce. Now I will ensure that you leave this dark kingdom of mine safely-and with your Triforce. Please, follow me. I know of a way that you can go home."

We escort them to our Sacred Realm, and Hilda uses the last of her power to send them through the portal, which then goes dark. I turn to Princess Hilda.

" By the way Princess, before Yuga was defeated, you remembered to take my bracelet back from him, right?"

Realization strikes her face.

" Whoops..."

We fall silent. A few minutes later, a triangular shape begins to form before us.

" They didn't.." I whisper in shocked amazement. That's right, Lorule's Triforce has returned. Now, we just need to worry about the "Yuga has my bracelet that grants different powers depending on the persons wish" problem. I had two of them, but one of them just got used up.
 
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*M i d n a*

Æsir Scribe
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Lol Dcat. Anyway, I read this last night but did not have the time to comment. I like it, but it's been a long while since I read or wrote anything relating to Zelda. I hope you go on with this project and finish it. But even if you don't, don't feel too bad with yourself, we're all trying out here in this jungle, and at times life just throws other stuff at us that gets in the way of our projects. Anyway, what Dragoncat means by her words is that you should do something like this for an easier read: ( I put it in spoiler, and if I can give you some advice, then don't space whatever a character is gonna start saying after you use ", it's okay to simply write the first letter after it. ;) )

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RAVIO

I love rabbits. Rabbits are survivors. Rabbits know when to run. That's a problem I have. I don't seem to know when to give up and run away. My name is Ravio, and I must be insane. Actually, never mind. I most certainly am insane. Why else would I be standing up to Hilda like this?

"So, begging your pardon Princess Zelda, but would you mind if I intervene here?"

I turn to Hilda. "Your Royal Highness-"

"You vanish on me and then come crawling back?! Why?!"

I wince. I suppose I deserved that. After all, we have known each other since childhood. In the months before Hilda hatched this crazy scheme of hers with Yuga, maybe we were something more. I don't know. Me dumb male. Me no understand female mind. I've understood her even less since she started plotting.

I just don't get it. If there's anything life in Lorule should teach you, it's that you need to work to attain happiness. Princess Hilda is waiting for my response. Not the Hilda I knew, or thought I did. No. This is the princess, her red eyes blazing and her staff tapping on the floor to show her impatience.

"Forgive me, Your Highness, I'm a coward at heart. There was no way I had the courage to stand up to you and Yuga. But I was smart enough to go to Hyrule. I knew they'd have a hero who could help me."

That's right. At least I ran away to a world where there was someone else to do the work. I smile bitterly.

"Another betrayal?! This hero has proven useful to me, but you-! You wanted him to defeat me?!"

Actually, no. In my imagination, I pictured him doing all of the work and then, we you two started fighting him, he'd reason with you and basically do everything I failed to do. But I don't think it would be a good idea to say that.

"I-I'm sorry, My Princess, but it was with the best of intentions." I pause for a moment, trying to put my thoughts on the subject in to relatively diplomatic words. "I wish the best for our kingdom, but by ruining Hyrule...? You'd bring out the absolute worst in Lorule."

Hilda glares at me with Royal Wrath in her eyes.

"You'd rather see Lorule crumble?!"

I shake my head. "No, no, of course not, Princess. But there must be some other way."

Hilda looks sad now. "No..."

A weakness! Now, I just need to exploit it.

"Don't you realize? The reason your ancestors destroyed our Triforce was to STOP such chaos!"

I've nearly gotten through her defenses. Her protests are getting weaker. I doubt her diplomatic training prepared her for a situation like this. She can't rely on ready-made answers when the enemy pierces through.

"That's not what I..." I prepare for the finishing blow. "Look around you! this is EXACTLY what happened with our Triforce!"

Shocked realization spreads across her face. I relax slightly. Victory is assured now.

"Oh no."

"Princess Hilda, I..."

It would be really funny if I said "I love you", but I don't think I should do that. "I just wanted to save you from all this-you, who've worried endlessly about the fate of Lorule. Please, Princess Hilda, let's do the right thing. Lorule may be doomed, but at least our kingdom won't be condemned for stealing their Triforce."


Checkmate. Now, I've provided an official excuse for her. It's for diplomatic relations. After all, we couldn't have good relations with other kingdoms if we were known as thieves. It has absolutely nothing to do with the fact that the plan was crazy and evil.

"You're right." She turns to the other Princess. "Princess Zelda, I have been led astray, tempted by the power of your Triforce. But I swear I did it for my people."

Link and Princess Zelda have just been standing there the entire time. Princess Zelda speaks up.

"Please, Princess Hilda, there is no need to-"

"No please, let me finish. You are so fortunate to have a hero like Link."

If I hadn't broken her defenses already, this probably would have started a new plot to kidnap Link.

"What courage he has displayed! That alone proves that Hyrule deserves its Triforce. Now I will ensure that you leave this dark kingdom of mine safely-and with your Triforce. Please, follow me. I know of a way that you can go home."

We escort them to our Sacred Realm, and Hilda uses the last of her power to send them through the portal, which then goes dark. I turn to Princess Hilda.

"By the way Princess, before Yuga was defeated, you remembered to take my bracelet back from him, right?"

Realization strikes her face.

"Whoops..."

We fall silent. A few minutes later, a triangular shape begins to form before us.

"They didn't.." I whisper in shocked amazement. That's right, Lorule's Triforce has returned. Now, we just need to worry about the "Yuga has my bracelet that grants different powers depending on the persons wish" problem. I had two of them, but one of them just got used up.
 

Woyogoyo

The Oncoming Storm
Joined
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Location
Sacred Realm
(( Thanks for the advice Gobli.))

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ELLENAR

I'm an old man now. Well, I suppose "Old Man" is the wrong way to put it. I was already old enough to be a fossil when the first dinosaur egg hatched. My name is Ellenar. I'm a Astral Elf. Since whoever reads this is most likely in a dimension that hasn't figured out or at least imagined that there are Astral Elves, I shall explain what my race is. Basically, we're immortal, non-corporeal beings who watch over the many dimensions and planets in them. Each of us watches over a dimension and all dimensions related to it. I watch over Earth and its relative dimensions. There are more than you might think.

Every nanosecond, thousands of new dimensions are created from what could have happened that nanosecond. Dimensions also spring from the ideas the inhabitants of those worlds have. Earth's people have great imaginations, so my job is more difficult than it sounds. It's rather fun though. I just finished watching an entertaining portion of the Zelda dimension's history, in which the denizens of Hyrule and Lorule encountered each other for the first time. Lorule used to be a completely separate dimension, but it looks like it's connected now. I check on Earth, and see that a man named Doug Stewart has almost completed a dimensional portal. Time to intervene. I descend to Earth and take possession of his cat. I then walk into the room where the device is and promptly scratch the extremely unstable power source. I love using cats for this kind of work. Especially black ones. I used to used humans as well, but I stopped after the Salem Witch Trials. It was a lot of fun though.

Once, I possessed I guy and used my powers while in his body. While being interrogated as to what my hame and business was, I saw a falcon and named myself Merlin. The humans still haven't forgotten me. It's rather amusing.

I exit the cat and attempt to go back, but I don't seem to be able to. I send my thoughts into the place between dimensions. WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS?! I thunder. I voice that I immediately recognize answers. Simple. A coup d'etat. Maldovar. You're now stuck on Earth. Ta-ta. He immediately cuts the link.

Anger is below me, as I realized that it was useless long ago. I need to search for a host. I find a black cat with green eyes and temporarily posses it. I wander around for a bit, until I see a potential host. He looks to be about twenty, tall, about 6'4, with black hair, blue eyes, and an athletic build. He'll do. I posses him, and decide to make some changes. I narrow his eyes, point his ears, and lengthen and style his hair until he looks like an elf. I also destroy the limiters that prohibits him from using all of his brain, and quickly fully develop it. As long as I'm possessing him, he can't die. Then, I change his garb into a black t-shirt, black leather jacket, blue jeans, and soft leather boots. I look rather odd with the long hair, but I quite like it. I check a mirror, and one eye has turned emerald green, so I give myself some sunglasses.

I find an empty house and set it a second out of sync with time, then walk in the front door I upgrade the house to a mansion, then I advance the technology in it 1000 years. Now, it's livable. When I was Merlin, I discovered that my limits were that I could use my power a certain number of times per day. When I used my powers up that day, I could only do things within human limitations until about noon the next day. It's quite frustrating. I've used up my power for today, so I go to sleep.
 
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Woyogoyo

The Oncoming Storm
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Location
Sacred Realm
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Aranel

I despise rabbits. They're so... soft, cuddly, and furry. It makes them so hard to kill. And in the world that I live in, that's a problem. My name's Aranel. I'm an elf. No, I'm not a tree-hugger, I'm a High Elf. Some call my race Drow, but that's not true. The Drow are a completely separate race. We're an oft-overlooked race, but we exist. We high elves live in cities like humans, except our cities are better. They have better architecture, people, economies, food, shops, and everything else imaginable. We have a rather unfortunate history. A long time ago, half of our race died in a magical spell. Legend says that they became non-corporeal guardian angel types, but I think that that's rubbish. They died, no need to embellish it. After that, our culture started to go downhill. Now, half the remaining population are thieves, 40% of the others are hunters, 9% are both, and the remainder are mages. I'm all three. Cool, right? No, not really. It's a lot of work. I got cast out of my city when I was young, so I need to find my own food. Which is why I hate rabbits. Deer, no problem. Birds, no problem. But I can never seem to kill rabbits. Like the one that got caught in my trap just now. I release the trap and let it go. " There, now shoo." It happily hops away, that sickeningly cute tail seeming to wave at me. How can something like that seem to wave? I really, really despise rabbits.

(( Sorry that it was so short today. This is all I had time for. I might lengthen it later, or I might just leave it as-is.))
 
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Woyogoyo

The Oncoming Storm
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Sacred Realm
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SLATE

Hi, I'm Slate. Sorry, no dramatic declarations from me. Besides the fact that I have a weird name, I'm pretty normal. I'm a 17 year old kid, with black hair, brown eyes, and about 50 years in my LECS account.

For all of the idiots that have been hiding under rocks for the past 50 years, the LECS (Life Exchange Currency System) is a system that uses life as a currency, instead of money. Basically, you access the app on your smartphone, hold it next to the device that you're transferring your remaining lifespan into, and transfer it. The largest recorded transfer was 5 millenniums, 6 centuries, 4 years, 7 months, 8 days, 3 hours, 18 minutes, and 42 seconds. The richest people and the world's average lifespan is 2 millenniums, and the poorest is about a year. I've heard that before the LACS was invented, people used paper money, but that's ridiculous. What can you do with paper?

Anyways, now that I've gotten the shut-ins up to date, I'll make a declaration. I'm in the middle of being mugged. " Hand over your phone." One of the muggers says. " No." I reply. I always keep about 20 years on my person so I don't die, but if my phone gets robbed, the 20 I have on me now will be my remaining lifespan. I'd like to have a long life, thank you very much. " Resisting? Okay boys, let's see if we can... convince him." One of them laughs the stupidest laugh I have ever heard, then, in an equally stupid voice, says. " Let's take his glasses off first. We might be able to sell them." " Good idea." The boss says. " Jim, get 'em off him." A big guy walks up to me. " You really don't want to take my glasses off." I say to him. He just sneers at me and pulls them off. I can feel my vision darkening as they are removed. " Put them back now please." I say, but they ignore me, and my vision fades to black.

I wake up in the control center. " Hey Slate." Chill says to me. " Who's in control now?" I ask. " Fear." Speed answers. " Those guys should be gone any minute now. Want a drink?" " Sure." I reply. " What do you have?" Byrne checks the fridge. " Soda, lemonade, fruit juice, and water." " I'll have a water."

Allow me to explain. The first time I hooked up to a LECS device, I had a negative reaction to it, and I got some kind of weird version of MPD. Basically, whenever my glasses are taken off, one of my other personalities takes over, changing my appearance and giving me weird powers. I go into a little room in my mind, chat with the other personas, and wait it out. Fear walks into the room. " You're up." He says to me, so I walk out of the room. All of us personas have nicknamed each other. Since we're technically the same person, we can't all be Slate. My nickname is Glasses. I have a weird life.
 

Woyogoyo

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Aaron

Slow, sarcastic clapping. That's all I hear as I finish playing. I glance up, and sure enough, it's her. The devil herself. Oh, how I despise her. I grit my teeth and attempt to calm myself down. I thought I'd sensed a malevolent force in the audience. That's probably why I messed up. I get off the piano bench and bow. Then, a light round of polite applause starts, but I can still hear that slow clapping. It shouldn't be possible with the crowd being as big as it is, but I can. I storm off the stage, where Frederick, my caretaker is. He gives me a disapproving look and follows me out the back door. It's raining, and I'm only wearing a tux. Oh joy. Frederick unlocks the car, and I get into the back, slamming the door behind me. Two hours later, we arrive at the house. It looks average on the outside, but on the inside, our basement is a studio. Since my mother is a famous pianist, she's away a lot. Right now, I feel like hating the world, so I probably shouldn't think of her. I walk into the bathroom and stare at my reflection in the mirror. Yep, face is still the same. Blond hair, blue eyes. Usually, I'm quite handsome, but today, my face seems hollow, my eyes dead. Frederick walks in. " You forgot to lock the door." " Shut up." I growl at him. I know he doesn't deserve it, but I feel like lashing out at someone right now. Frederick just raises an eyebrow. " Is that any way to behave? I invited several influential people to your birthday party tomorrow evening. You'll need to cheer up, or at least put on a facade of cheerfulness by then." He smiles slightly. " Is it because she was there?" I snort. " What do you think? Yes, of course it is!" I shake my head and try to put on a cheerful facade. He's right, of course. I'll need to get rid of this black mood before my 16th birthday part tomorrow, not that I'm looking forward to having to exchange polite comments with total strangers. I sigh. " Can't you delay the party for a few days?" He shakes his head. " You know the answer to that. If I delay, you'll lose half of the guests. Because of your performance today, maybe even all of them. If you want to be a famous pianist, you need to stay connected to the right people. Your mother being who she is helps, but if you want to be your own person, not just your mother's son, you can't depend on your mother's connections, you need to make your own." I sigh again. " I know." I straighten up and walk out of the bathroom. " Well, I suppose I should get some dry clothes on. What's on TV?" " Actually." Frederick says. " You need to go to bed. It's already eleven o'clock. I shrug in defeat. " Worth a shot." I walk upstairs, throw my wet clothes into my laundry basket, and climb into bed. I expect to lay awake for awhile, but surprisingly, I'm asleep almost immediately.
 

Woyogoyo

The Oncoming Storm
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CELSIO

Erik, the highest level player in the VRMMORPG BladeDance, looked at the player that had just entered the hall, terrified. He shouldn't have had any reason to be terrified, after all, he was the best. But he was. He looked in horror at the player that had just walked in, terrified of that one little symbol above the player's head. Those that didn't know would laugh, wondering why he was scared of a question mark. The answer was very simple. In BD, a player's name, level, guild, and any titles he or she may have. However, when a player is at least a hundred levels above you, their level and title is just a question mark. But that's impossible! Erik thought furiously. It's been confirmed that I'm the strongest player! He looked at the player's name, wanting to memorize the name of the only one stronger than him. It was: Excelsior.

I walked into the hall where Erik, the game's public strongest player, was about to make his announcement. I was taking a break from grinding in the Astrolius Plains. When I heard that there would be an announcement, I decided to come just to make fun of him in my head. In their announcements, all the previous strongest plasters had done was brag about their supremacy, not knowing that there were several players in the audience that had other characters hundreds of levels higher than them. This time, I had ben too lazy to change characters, so I had just come in my own avatar, who was level 1,298. It had been very difficult to achieve this, but after two years of playing this game 24/7, I had managed it. Of course, IRL, I now looked like a vampire. Oh well. MY avatar looked like me before I had started playing, Tall, athletic build, black hair, and green eyes. Not a bad appearance, but not quite handsome. I blame it on my nose, which I fixed when I made my avatar. Erik started speaking. " Fellow adventurers..." I immediately stopped listening as it sounded like it was going to be stuffy. Instead, I checked the status of my guild members, all of whom were offline, probably attending this in disguise. My guild, The Rose Dragons, was a guild I had formed with my friends Ariolus and Jabberwock back when we were level ten. We decided on the name by each person yelling out a random word. I think it could have turned out much worse. I perk up as Erik finishes his speech, then decide to go back to Astrolius. After all, I'm aiming for level 1,300 by the end of the day.
 

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