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Raven's Poetry Thread

Raven

Former Hylian Knight
Joined
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Location
Halifax
Just thought this up a few days back and decided to share it with you guys. I love writing and poetry so I hope you enjoy it

Beneath the sky a castle stands,
A royal princess and her lands.
But high above in the azure blue,
A hero dreampt that he had flew...

Down to lands he did not know,
and slew the beast.
His test, their foe.

It's short but I think it's a fair description of the game, any thoughts?
 

Raven

Former Hylian Knight
Joined
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Location
Halifax
Wicked! thanks for the input guys =D does anyone feel it should be longer? or do you think i could get away with leaving it that short.
 

Raven

Former Hylian Knight
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Location
Halifax
how do you know Zelda is not the princess of Skyloft? I doubt there will be any Hylians or Humans at all in Hyrule.

Skyloft seems unaware of the situation down in Hyrule. if the castle were in the sky than how can the royal family do anything about the trouble below? it would make more sense if Hyrule castle stayed in Hyrule.. just a feeling but I think there will be tons of characters do to the style they are using. I think both skyloft and Hyrule will be heavily populated.
 

Raven

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Location
Halifax
wow thanks ark! i didnt think about it like that but your right it is catchy lol
 

Raven

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Location
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A Bridge Out Of Nowhere

It feels like the wind is flying,
Is it just me or is this perfect timing.
This bridge out of nowhere that could be a trap,
Because once I cross I might never look back.

a short poem inspired by a dream.
 

arkvoodle

Diabolical
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Sep 20, 2008
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Somewhere
That is a very interesting poem, Raven. It seems to have a deeper meaning that I can't help but think about.
Great work~
 

Raven

Former Hylian Knight
Joined
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Location
Halifax
The Shy Boy

Bright the early riser seems,
But in his heart the shy boy screams.
To stay away from this cold place,
And hide the pain he could not face.

Sometimes I feel like this...
 

arkvoodle

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Somewhere
I think we all feel like that sometimes Raven. Good poem.

Could I suggest making a Poetry thread? Maybe 'Raven's Poetry'? That way, we can keep track of all of your poems~

I can't wait to see more of your works.
 

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