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Raven's Poetry Thread

Raven

Former Hylian Knight
Joined
Jun 8, 2009
Location
Halifax
thx for the suggestion ill make 1 thread for all of it =)

and i really enjoy your feedback ark
 

Raven

Former Hylian Knight
Joined
Jun 8, 2009
Location
Halifax
Zombie Poetry 1

It's been a while since i posted a new poem, here's one about zombs. It was just a two liner when i thought of it around 3-4 in the morning trying to go to sleep. As soon as I thought of it I wrote it down in my cellphone (which is usually right beside my bed), then I just added two more line, one before the rhyme and one inbetween? anyway check it

Running through the blood stained streets,
Till the morn I seek arrives.
Hoping for that day to come,
I kill the dead untill sunrise.

like my previous poems it's short =)
 

Ghosi

Schmetterling
Joined
Oct 4, 2010
Location
Z-axis
Awesome Raven! The poems always seem mysterious to me, which is a perfect definition of what poetry should be. Good job!
 

Anemos

Master of Chaos
Joined
May 12, 2010
Location
The United States of Hysteria
FUNNY IRONY IS IRONIC.

Yeah. I've just been reading Edgar Allen Poe. "Raven's Poetry" just seems...amusing.

Great job, though. A small suggestion: poetry does not have to rhyme. I could say...

I am a bird
I am a fish
Fish are stupid
Birds are stupid
I am a toad
Toads eat birds and fish
Fish eat socks

...and it would still be a poem. Poetry is, by my definition, the writing of verses from one's own emotion or ideas.

But that's just me. You don't really need my help. You're doing great on your own.
 

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