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Hey guys, this is my new story. Hope you guys like these! ^^
LEGENDS OF CARABU:
PROLOUGUE: JOEY AND SAVANNAH
One fine, summer day, a young boy of 13 named Joey sat in the fields of his hometown, Carabu. The lush, green fields covered a large area of the world he lived in. This world isn't like ours: we're not even CLOSE to being where it is and as upgraded in tech it is. It's not even in our galaxy, The Mily Way, it's in a whole different one, called "Galaxy Omega", as it is the biggest, techiest galaxy out there. It has more things than our minds can even comprehend, worlds greater than you can imagine. One of the worlds holds the lands of Carabu, Takami, and Xeno. This world is known as "Gaia". Carabu is the lush greenery of Gaia. Takami is the part of Gaia with big, busy cities. Xion is the land no one dares venture to, the land of torture and terror. The other 2 worlds in Galaxy Omega are called "Yoran" and "Terre". Each world has their own version of each other, one third busy cities, one third lush greenery, the last third torturous and cruel. Now back to Joey: he sat in the green fields, enjoying the scenery of the cities at the end of the foothills. He saw a shadow above him. Joey turned around and saw his girlfriend, Savannah. "Oh, hey, Savannah!" Joey said. "Hey, Joey, whatcha doin?" Savannah replied. "Just looking out at Takami." Joey turned his head towards the cities. "Oh, mind if I sit with you?" "Not at all." Joey moved over so Savannah could sit down. They stayed silent for a while. About 10 minutes later, Joey saw something out of the corner of his eye. "What was that?" he got up. "What was what?" Savannah asked. "I saw something over there." Joey pointed at a large boulder. Savannah got up. "Let's go check it out then."
* * *
When they reached the boulder, they were puzzled. "How are we supposed to move this?" Joey asked. "Let's just try." Savannah pushed the boulder. Joey did, too. With their combined strength, they managed to push the boulder just enough to open a crevice big enough for someone to crawl through. So, they did. The cave was narrow and dark. Occasionally, the two bumped into walls, but soon enough, they came to an opening in the tunnel lit my a lamp. They crawled out. There was someone sitting in a chair in front of a fireplace, looking as if he was reading something.Joey and Savannah quietly came closer to the chair. Abruptly, the man jumped up and held his hand out towards the couple. "Haro-tabu-nashi!" A blue beam of light shot towards Joey. As soon as it hit him, he froze solid. "JOEY!" Savannah yelled. "Haro-tabu-nashi!" Savannah was frozen in less than a second. "What a predicament you two are in... BWAHAHAHA!!"
ALso, I decided to cancel the sign-ups because no-one would reply...
Hope you liked it!
~Linkanon~
LEGENDS OF CARABU:
PROLOUGUE: JOEY AND SAVANNAH
One fine, summer day, a young boy of 13 named Joey sat in the fields of his hometown, Carabu. The lush, green fields covered a large area of the world he lived in. This world isn't like ours: we're not even CLOSE to being where it is and as upgraded in tech it is. It's not even in our galaxy, The Mily Way, it's in a whole different one, called "Galaxy Omega", as it is the biggest, techiest galaxy out there. It has more things than our minds can even comprehend, worlds greater than you can imagine. One of the worlds holds the lands of Carabu, Takami, and Xeno. This world is known as "Gaia". Carabu is the lush greenery of Gaia. Takami is the part of Gaia with big, busy cities. Xion is the land no one dares venture to, the land of torture and terror. The other 2 worlds in Galaxy Omega are called "Yoran" and "Terre". Each world has their own version of each other, one third busy cities, one third lush greenery, the last third torturous and cruel. Now back to Joey: he sat in the green fields, enjoying the scenery of the cities at the end of the foothills. He saw a shadow above him. Joey turned around and saw his girlfriend, Savannah. "Oh, hey, Savannah!" Joey said. "Hey, Joey, whatcha doin?" Savannah replied. "Just looking out at Takami." Joey turned his head towards the cities. "Oh, mind if I sit with you?" "Not at all." Joey moved over so Savannah could sit down. They stayed silent for a while. About 10 minutes later, Joey saw something out of the corner of his eye. "What was that?" he got up. "What was what?" Savannah asked. "I saw something over there." Joey pointed at a large boulder. Savannah got up. "Let's go check it out then."
* * *
When they reached the boulder, they were puzzled. "How are we supposed to move this?" Joey asked. "Let's just try." Savannah pushed the boulder. Joey did, too. With their combined strength, they managed to push the boulder just enough to open a crevice big enough for someone to crawl through. So, they did. The cave was narrow and dark. Occasionally, the two bumped into walls, but soon enough, they came to an opening in the tunnel lit my a lamp. They crawled out. There was someone sitting in a chair in front of a fireplace, looking as if he was reading something.Joey and Savannah quietly came closer to the chair. Abruptly, the man jumped up and held his hand out towards the couple. "Haro-tabu-nashi!" A blue beam of light shot towards Joey. As soon as it hit him, he froze solid. "JOEY!" Savannah yelled. "Haro-tabu-nashi!" Savannah was frozen in less than a second. "What a predicament you two are in... BWAHAHAHA!!"
ALso, I decided to cancel the sign-ups because no-one would reply...
Hope you liked it!
~Linkanon~
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