Myriadviper42
Fulcrum Agent
- Joined
- Feb 14, 2010
- Location
- Control
Welcome to my next story here at ZD! Hope you enjoy, give some constructive criticism, etc. And just so you know, any change from third person to first person in the prologue is completely intentional.
"Two of the greatest flaws of mankind are its tendency to apply meaning to things that have no meaning, and its arrogant belief that it is always right and that anyone who disagrees is wrong. As it is, there are mysteries of the universe that mankind could never hope to unlock, and indeed would best be kept secret..."
-Bartholomew Trueman
Prologue
He could feel the cold metal against his palm. His grip was like a vise, and his breathing was deep and slow. It was strange to think that such a small object could snuff a person's life out instantly. A hole would be left in the people around him, knowing that that person would never come back. It was strange to think about. Very strange. Almost surreal. Breathe in. Breathe out. Breathe in. Breathe out. Slowly. Calmly. The car was musty, hot. His grip released on the gun, and he closed his eyes. Open. He glanced at his watch, to check the timeframe. Almost. Almost. Almost. His free hand, the one not holding the gun, twitched. Soon soon soon soon soon.
He was a rather attractive man, in his twenties. He had shortish dark brown hair, a prominent nose, and tan skin. His small green eyes constantly flitted about, and he had a rather muscular frame. He could hear the sounds of the party from his car. Boring, boring, and boring. Upper-class, high-and-mighty-snot-nosed cowards dressed in human skin. And tuxedos/dresses, depending on the gender. Or at least, those were some of the thoughts going through his mind. It might be a good time to note that the man in question, holding a gun in his hand and preparing himself for something was not entirely stable. Not entirely. His name was Damien Byrne. No criminal record. No reason to do what he was about to do. At all. Apparently.
His grip loosened slightly on the gun, and his eyes looked toward his watch once again. Now it was time. Time...the last time, and the first time, all in one! A small, slightly crazy smile flitted across his face and he opened the car door, stepping out into the parking lot, putting a silencer on his gun as he did so. He strode towards the doors of the building with a purpose, wearing his best suit and tie. His breathing started to speed up, however he managed to control it. Why was he doing this again? Why did he HAVE to, exactly? He wasn't sure it was worth it. Was it? Remember the mission, he told himself. This has to be right. Sooner or later they'll lock me up, might as well rush it a little bit so it's on my terms, yes, yes. Then when the time is right I will be ready.
He arrived at the door. A guard stood watch, letting visitors in and out. Currently there was no one going in, no one going out. Except for Damien, of course. Which is just how they planned it, yes, yes. So far, so good. The guard looked up at him, and his reflexes were one second too late. Damien had already pulled the trigger, the bullet hitting the poor guard in the forehead. No one had witnessed the incident. Yes, the time frame was indeed correct, yes. He hid the guard's body in the bushes and walked into the building. He wouldn't worry about someone not noticing a guard. It would be the least of their worries.
He looked around at the ornate hall. It was made entirely of marble, with green drapes around the place. There were string instruments and chatter in his ears, and he looked around, seeing the people mingling with one another, laughing with one another. It made him squirm with disgust, and he found his target. A pudgy man, sitting at one of the many tables in the room, laughing merrily with several other people. He put his hands in his pocket and unscrewed the silencer. Then, with an eerie calm, he raised the gun at the pudgy man, still chortling and taking a sip of wine-
Bang.
Screams erupted from the party as the host fell over, a bullet wound in his chest. Instantly Damien gauged it to be fatal. He turned towards the nearest person, a woman hastily backing away from him. Another shot, another life ended with a pull of the trigger. He raised the gun and fired shot after shot, and each shot found its mark. Dead bodies littered the floor. The crowd was in a frenzy, scrambling to get out of the building with a mad ferocity, as more people kept falling left and right. Security guards ran towards him, guns raised as Damien stood calmly on the bloodstained floor.
"Freeze! Now!"
The words rang out, echoing off the walls, and Damien turned towards the four men moving cautiously toward him, guns raised. Damien's gun fell to the floor, and he smiled politely at the guards.He raised his hands over his head, getting on his knees, and accepted his fate.
All according to plan.
Chapter 1
My mind has been uneasy for a while now. I do not know the ultimate source, however it just is. I feel like I'm missing something critically important, but I have no earthly idea what it is. I've been thinking a lot about the past lately, my past, to be more exact. I do have quite the past. I sigh and decide to mull this over once again, neglecting the business meeting I'm supposed to be attending right now. They won't need me. Perhaps, if I go over again all the horrors in my past once more, I can determine the source of what's troubling me. Perhaps. Perhaps not. I look at myself in the mirror. I see my short dark hair, big nose, and my green eyes. The face that was strung all over the news after...it happened.
Ten years ago, on a September night, my twin brother, Damien, killed thirteen people at a party, for no apparent reason whatsoever. No one was able to determine any motive, and he was imprisoned for life. And, being the twin brother of a headline-making homicidal maniac, I've gotten my fair share of stares, although that has of course dwindled significantly over the course of ten years. Then, I decided to get my mind off of it and do some good in the world, and went to Sudan as a UN peacekeeper and got my leg blown off. Always fun, I know. Then, I returned to find that my wife had deserted me, leaving me with a newborn daughter. It was a hard year. A brother, a wife, and a leg all lost.
Since then, I've been working to turn my life around, and for the most part have. I have a steady job as a businessman, I'm getting good money, my daughter and I are happy. However, lately, there's been an uneasiness around me. I can feel it. I feel like there's someone watching me, someone observing me. I see someone abnormal, out of place in the busy New York crowd, looking at me, and then the next moment gone. It is disorienting. It's not that I'm afraid, per say. I'm just...unsettled. It could be nothing, it could just be my imagination running wild, but then again, who knows? God knows I sure don't.
My cell phone rings. I sigh. It's probably my boss, asking why I'm not at the meeting. I look at the caller I.D. but it isn't my boss. It's a different number, not one I recognize. I answer.
"Hello, this is Daniel Byrne, how can I help you?"
There's a pause, and then a man answers. "Hello, Mr. Byrne. My name is Joseph Slater. It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance."
"Slater? From AlTech Industries?"
"The very same. I'm calling to arrange a potential business meeting with you, Mr. Byrne. My clients have taken an interest in you and your work. We feel that we could reach some...mutually beneficial agreement."
"Well...if you insist, Mr. Slater. I must say, I didn't think our corporation was quite large enough to get your attention."
"Are you complaining," he says, a note of amusement in his tone.
"No no," I say hurriedly, "just a little surprised is all. All right. Is there a specific place you'd like to discuss?"
"Yes, yes. I like to do one-on-one business dealings in Starbucks. Nice latte, you know."
"This is a one-on-one business dealing?"
"No, just to start out with. Just want to see what we're getting into."
"Understood. Friday, at noon?"
"You have a deal."
"Goodbye, Mr. Slater."
I hang up. Something still seems off. And I'm still not sure what it is. I look around my house. Perhaps this business dealing could be the distraction I need to get my unease off my mind. I've heard of Slater. He's a very successful businessman, to be associated with him could mean a huge improvement for me right now. So I'll go to this business dealing. See what he has to offer. And hey, if life gives you lemons? Make lemonade. But then again, in the space of one year, life gave me a total of three brussels sprouts (my least favorite food ever. Of all time.), and I had to take them too. So is this a Brussels sprout, or a lemon? ...and now that I just asked that question I feel really stupid about it. Great.
***
Slater hung up the phone and smirked. Slater himself was young-looking, with long light-brown hair and beady brown eyes, and a pale complexion. He looked slick as an eel, and had been compared to as such on many occasions. He was noted as always wearing a suit and tie, and maintaining an aloofness towards his clients, as if he considered himself better than them.
"Did he take it, Joe?"
The other man in the room was a far cry from his companion. He was short, squat, and had a face that looked like an anvil had been dropped on it. He wore a salmon button-up shirt, and seemed to have a permanent scowl etched on his face. Duly noted, a far cry from the elegant snake of Joseph Slater.
"I told you not to call me Joe," Slater said, concealing a fake yawn behind his thin fingertips.
The second man snorted. "Yeah, whatever. I don't get why ya don't like it. Perfectly good name, after all," he drawled, his nasally voice grating on Slater's ears. He sat in his chair stiffly, as if afraid that if he were to relax he'd get an allergic reaction.
Slater ignored this. His companion, Grant Aamor, was a direct representative of the boss and therefore could not be thrown out a window without fearing the boss's wrath, a fact which greatly irked Slater. "Grant, just so you know, we have arranged a meeting for Friday, and I am certain that we'll be able to get the money easily. Don't worry about it."
Grant openly scoffed at this. "Don't worry about it? Yeah, I'm worrying about it. That's my job, thankyouverymuch, good day, sooooo, Mr. Joe Slater, please do me a favor and reassure me-and the boss-that you can get this done."
"You know me," Slater said, sitting down. "I've done this kind of thing before."
"Well, you know, we kind of need that piece of equipment, and we just might need to have the money to buy it. And even though you seem to think that we have unlimited resources, Master Slater, the fact is..." His face, if possible, contorted even more. "...we don't. So if you would, PLEASE do us a favor and give us a GUARANTEE that you can GET THIS DONE?" As he said the words, Aamor stood up and advanced on Slater, jabbing his finger at him.
Slater looked at him, unimpressed, mainly because Aamor didn't have that great a shouting voice and the fact that he was five foot zero. "Don't worry about it. I have everything under control. Now if you could do me the favor of leaving..."
Aamor grumbled, and stomped off, opening and slamming the door in his wake. Slater rolled his eyes, and sighed.
"Could this plan get any more convoluted?" he grumbled, as he examined a mugshot.
A mugshot of a certain Damien Byrne.
***
Well, I hope you enjoyed. It may seem rather small-scale at the moment, but I assure you, it's not. Dr. Horrible's character appeared first because the rest of the protagonists will be introduced a couple of chapters in at the same time. So you have that to look forward to. Thank you, leave your thoughts, some criticisms, bye.
"Two of the greatest flaws of mankind are its tendency to apply meaning to things that have no meaning, and its arrogant belief that it is always right and that anyone who disagrees is wrong. As it is, there are mysteries of the universe that mankind could never hope to unlock, and indeed would best be kept secret..."
-Bartholomew Trueman
Prologue
He could feel the cold metal against his palm. His grip was like a vise, and his breathing was deep and slow. It was strange to think that such a small object could snuff a person's life out instantly. A hole would be left in the people around him, knowing that that person would never come back. It was strange to think about. Very strange. Almost surreal. Breathe in. Breathe out. Breathe in. Breathe out. Slowly. Calmly. The car was musty, hot. His grip released on the gun, and he closed his eyes. Open. He glanced at his watch, to check the timeframe. Almost. Almost. Almost. His free hand, the one not holding the gun, twitched. Soon soon soon soon soon.
He was a rather attractive man, in his twenties. He had shortish dark brown hair, a prominent nose, and tan skin. His small green eyes constantly flitted about, and he had a rather muscular frame. He could hear the sounds of the party from his car. Boring, boring, and boring. Upper-class, high-and-mighty-snot-nosed cowards dressed in human skin. And tuxedos/dresses, depending on the gender. Or at least, those were some of the thoughts going through his mind. It might be a good time to note that the man in question, holding a gun in his hand and preparing himself for something was not entirely stable. Not entirely. His name was Damien Byrne. No criminal record. No reason to do what he was about to do. At all. Apparently.
His grip loosened slightly on the gun, and his eyes looked toward his watch once again. Now it was time. Time...the last time, and the first time, all in one! A small, slightly crazy smile flitted across his face and he opened the car door, stepping out into the parking lot, putting a silencer on his gun as he did so. He strode towards the doors of the building with a purpose, wearing his best suit and tie. His breathing started to speed up, however he managed to control it. Why was he doing this again? Why did he HAVE to, exactly? He wasn't sure it was worth it. Was it? Remember the mission, he told himself. This has to be right. Sooner or later they'll lock me up, might as well rush it a little bit so it's on my terms, yes, yes. Then when the time is right I will be ready.
He arrived at the door. A guard stood watch, letting visitors in and out. Currently there was no one going in, no one going out. Except for Damien, of course. Which is just how they planned it, yes, yes. So far, so good. The guard looked up at him, and his reflexes were one second too late. Damien had already pulled the trigger, the bullet hitting the poor guard in the forehead. No one had witnessed the incident. Yes, the time frame was indeed correct, yes. He hid the guard's body in the bushes and walked into the building. He wouldn't worry about someone not noticing a guard. It would be the least of their worries.
He looked around at the ornate hall. It was made entirely of marble, with green drapes around the place. There were string instruments and chatter in his ears, and he looked around, seeing the people mingling with one another, laughing with one another. It made him squirm with disgust, and he found his target. A pudgy man, sitting at one of the many tables in the room, laughing merrily with several other people. He put his hands in his pocket and unscrewed the silencer. Then, with an eerie calm, he raised the gun at the pudgy man, still chortling and taking a sip of wine-
Bang.
Screams erupted from the party as the host fell over, a bullet wound in his chest. Instantly Damien gauged it to be fatal. He turned towards the nearest person, a woman hastily backing away from him. Another shot, another life ended with a pull of the trigger. He raised the gun and fired shot after shot, and each shot found its mark. Dead bodies littered the floor. The crowd was in a frenzy, scrambling to get out of the building with a mad ferocity, as more people kept falling left and right. Security guards ran towards him, guns raised as Damien stood calmly on the bloodstained floor.
"Freeze! Now!"
The words rang out, echoing off the walls, and Damien turned towards the four men moving cautiously toward him, guns raised. Damien's gun fell to the floor, and he smiled politely at the guards.He raised his hands over his head, getting on his knees, and accepted his fate.
All according to plan.
Chapter 1
My mind has been uneasy for a while now. I do not know the ultimate source, however it just is. I feel like I'm missing something critically important, but I have no earthly idea what it is. I've been thinking a lot about the past lately, my past, to be more exact. I do have quite the past. I sigh and decide to mull this over once again, neglecting the business meeting I'm supposed to be attending right now. They won't need me. Perhaps, if I go over again all the horrors in my past once more, I can determine the source of what's troubling me. Perhaps. Perhaps not. I look at myself in the mirror. I see my short dark hair, big nose, and my green eyes. The face that was strung all over the news after...it happened.
Ten years ago, on a September night, my twin brother, Damien, killed thirteen people at a party, for no apparent reason whatsoever. No one was able to determine any motive, and he was imprisoned for life. And, being the twin brother of a headline-making homicidal maniac, I've gotten my fair share of stares, although that has of course dwindled significantly over the course of ten years. Then, I decided to get my mind off of it and do some good in the world, and went to Sudan as a UN peacekeeper and got my leg blown off. Always fun, I know. Then, I returned to find that my wife had deserted me, leaving me with a newborn daughter. It was a hard year. A brother, a wife, and a leg all lost.
Since then, I've been working to turn my life around, and for the most part have. I have a steady job as a businessman, I'm getting good money, my daughter and I are happy. However, lately, there's been an uneasiness around me. I can feel it. I feel like there's someone watching me, someone observing me. I see someone abnormal, out of place in the busy New York crowd, looking at me, and then the next moment gone. It is disorienting. It's not that I'm afraid, per say. I'm just...unsettled. It could be nothing, it could just be my imagination running wild, but then again, who knows? God knows I sure don't.
My cell phone rings. I sigh. It's probably my boss, asking why I'm not at the meeting. I look at the caller I.D. but it isn't my boss. It's a different number, not one I recognize. I answer.
"Hello, this is Daniel Byrne, how can I help you?"
There's a pause, and then a man answers. "Hello, Mr. Byrne. My name is Joseph Slater. It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance."
"Slater? From AlTech Industries?"
"The very same. I'm calling to arrange a potential business meeting with you, Mr. Byrne. My clients have taken an interest in you and your work. We feel that we could reach some...mutually beneficial agreement."
"Well...if you insist, Mr. Slater. I must say, I didn't think our corporation was quite large enough to get your attention."
"Are you complaining," he says, a note of amusement in his tone.
"No no," I say hurriedly, "just a little surprised is all. All right. Is there a specific place you'd like to discuss?"
"Yes, yes. I like to do one-on-one business dealings in Starbucks. Nice latte, you know."
"This is a one-on-one business dealing?"
"No, just to start out with. Just want to see what we're getting into."
"Understood. Friday, at noon?"
"You have a deal."
"Goodbye, Mr. Slater."
I hang up. Something still seems off. And I'm still not sure what it is. I look around my house. Perhaps this business dealing could be the distraction I need to get my unease off my mind. I've heard of Slater. He's a very successful businessman, to be associated with him could mean a huge improvement for me right now. So I'll go to this business dealing. See what he has to offer. And hey, if life gives you lemons? Make lemonade. But then again, in the space of one year, life gave me a total of three brussels sprouts (my least favorite food ever. Of all time.), and I had to take them too. So is this a Brussels sprout, or a lemon? ...and now that I just asked that question I feel really stupid about it. Great.
***
Slater hung up the phone and smirked. Slater himself was young-looking, with long light-brown hair and beady brown eyes, and a pale complexion. He looked slick as an eel, and had been compared to as such on many occasions. He was noted as always wearing a suit and tie, and maintaining an aloofness towards his clients, as if he considered himself better than them.
"Did he take it, Joe?"
The other man in the room was a far cry from his companion. He was short, squat, and had a face that looked like an anvil had been dropped on it. He wore a salmon button-up shirt, and seemed to have a permanent scowl etched on his face. Duly noted, a far cry from the elegant snake of Joseph Slater.
"I told you not to call me Joe," Slater said, concealing a fake yawn behind his thin fingertips.
The second man snorted. "Yeah, whatever. I don't get why ya don't like it. Perfectly good name, after all," he drawled, his nasally voice grating on Slater's ears. He sat in his chair stiffly, as if afraid that if he were to relax he'd get an allergic reaction.
Slater ignored this. His companion, Grant Aamor, was a direct representative of the boss and therefore could not be thrown out a window without fearing the boss's wrath, a fact which greatly irked Slater. "Grant, just so you know, we have arranged a meeting for Friday, and I am certain that we'll be able to get the money easily. Don't worry about it."
Grant openly scoffed at this. "Don't worry about it? Yeah, I'm worrying about it. That's my job, thankyouverymuch, good day, sooooo, Mr. Joe Slater, please do me a favor and reassure me-and the boss-that you can get this done."
"You know me," Slater said, sitting down. "I've done this kind of thing before."
"Well, you know, we kind of need that piece of equipment, and we just might need to have the money to buy it. And even though you seem to think that we have unlimited resources, Master Slater, the fact is..." His face, if possible, contorted even more. "...we don't. So if you would, PLEASE do us a favor and give us a GUARANTEE that you can GET THIS DONE?" As he said the words, Aamor stood up and advanced on Slater, jabbing his finger at him.
Slater looked at him, unimpressed, mainly because Aamor didn't have that great a shouting voice and the fact that he was five foot zero. "Don't worry about it. I have everything under control. Now if you could do me the favor of leaving..."
Aamor grumbled, and stomped off, opening and slamming the door in his wake. Slater rolled his eyes, and sighed.
"Could this plan get any more convoluted?" he grumbled, as he examined a mugshot.
A mugshot of a certain Damien Byrne.
***
Well, I hope you enjoyed. It may seem rather small-scale at the moment, but I assure you, it's not. Dr. Horrible's character appeared first because the rest of the protagonists will be introduced a couple of chapters in at the same time. So you have that to look forward to. Thank you, leave your thoughts, some criticisms, bye.
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