blue-eyes
Phoenix
- Joined
- Jul 28, 2010
- Location
- Among the stars
I just finished chapter 1, and I decided to post it. It has 6 gatekeepers instead of 5 now.
Ryli was standing on a pillar in the middle of the ocean. It was neither day nor night, and it would stay like that. She looked at the shore in the distance, and saw 4 boys and a girl who all looked her age, 14. Two of the boys looked identical, another one was normal height, and the last one was tall. The girl looked average height. Ryli couldn’t make out details, as there was little light. Ryli heard a loud screech and she looked up. A giant Condor was hurtling straight for her. Right before it hit, Ryli awoke.
Ryli had that dream often, and it always seemed so real each time. She quickly got out of bed and got dressed. She was around 5 foot 2, had blonde hair down to her shoulders, and was thin. She was wearing a t-shirt and jeans. She opened her door and walked down the stairs leading to her living room. She looked out of the window and saw the sun had just risen over the horizon. She opened the door, her red bag in her hand, and started walking toward her school.
She walked inside and smelt burnt toast. She closed her eyes and saw a Dodge Viper come through the door she had just entered and hit her. She opened her eyes and ran, just as the same car she had just seen crash through the door. The driver, a woman with red hair and caramel eyes, pulled out a handgun and aimed it at Ryli, and then shot. Before it hit her, it had fallen to the ground. Ryli ran out of the building, and a white truck screeched to a halt right before her.
“Get in!” shouted the driver, a man with short dark brown hair and emerald green eyes. Ryli hesitated and he yelled, “Get in before she kills you!” Ryli jumped into the back of the car as a bullet shot past the spot her head had been half a second before.
“Why did you save me? And who are you?” She asked, looking at the man
“I am Kevin Ki, and I saved you because you are one of the 6 gatekeepers. I will explain this all when we reach the headquarters,”
Chapter 1
Ryli was standing on a pillar in the middle of the ocean. It was neither day nor night, and it would stay like that. She looked at the shore in the distance, and saw 4 boys and a girl who all looked her age, 14. Two of the boys looked identical, another one was normal height, and the last one was tall. The girl looked average height. Ryli couldn’t make out details, as there was little light. Ryli heard a loud screech and she looked up. A giant Condor was hurtling straight for her. Right before it hit, Ryli awoke.
Ryli had that dream often, and it always seemed so real each time. She quickly got out of bed and got dressed. She was around 5 foot 2, had blonde hair down to her shoulders, and was thin. She was wearing a t-shirt and jeans. She opened her door and walked down the stairs leading to her living room. She looked out of the window and saw the sun had just risen over the horizon. She opened the door, her red bag in her hand, and started walking toward her school.
She walked inside and smelt burnt toast. She closed her eyes and saw a Dodge Viper come through the door she had just entered and hit her. She opened her eyes and ran, just as the same car she had just seen crash through the door. The driver, a woman with red hair and caramel eyes, pulled out a handgun and aimed it at Ryli, and then shot. Before it hit her, it had fallen to the ground. Ryli ran out of the building, and a white truck screeched to a halt right before her.
“Get in!” shouted the driver, a man with short dark brown hair and emerald green eyes. Ryli hesitated and he yelled, “Get in before she kills you!” Ryli jumped into the back of the car as a bullet shot past the spot her head had been half a second before.
“Why did you save me? And who are you?” She asked, looking at the man
“I am Kevin Ki, and I saved you because you are one of the 6 gatekeepers. I will explain this all when we reach the headquarters,”