Joy
The Sexy One
- Joined
- Aug 18, 2012
- Location
- In your pants.
Wow wow wow! I'm glad I took time to read this! You're a good writer! The story is really interesting and I love the characters!
If I may just point out one small thing...

If I may just point out one small thing...
Nothing big, this just made me twitch a little when I was reading.The girl interrupted, "My name is Olivia! I am the fastest myrmidon this side of Tellius! I saved your butts back their! Anywho, like their leader said, what kind of mercenary group are you? Your swordsmanship is sloppy! Out here, you'd be killed in seconds."
