Well, what can I say? You wrote again, that's something, you beat writer's block for now, try to keep it that way. ^^ And Rainy already mentioned the few mistakes you made, so you'll be fine. It's good to see Lance reuniting with an old buddy, and I wonder whether he'll do anything later on to reclaim the house that the thugs claimed as theirs. I hope that he does. Anyway, keep up the good work, Scars.