Dear Agony

[Link12]

ok me and a band member came up with this its called dear agony lol

Verse 1
Get me through this pain
Give me peace in this torment to stay
Save me from this misery
Dear Agony ohhhh Dear Agony

Chorus

I can't live, I can not die
Talking to myself inside this holding cell
It's like hell
With darkness imprisioning me
Get me out of here

Verse 2

You got me down
I tried to get up but..
You became ankle wieghts on my soul
Dear Agony ohhh Dear Agony

Chorus

Bridge/Solo?

Verse 3

So I'm goina break free x2
I'm going to live my life
The way it's meant to be
IT'S BETWEEN YOU AND ME!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dear Agony ohhh Dear Agony

Please comment

 

[Johnny Sooshi]

I like it

 

[Ronin]

Spectacular! I love the flow of the lyrics.

Parts of the song actually remind me of Dear Agony by Breaking Benjamin:
[video=youtube;KGrM1sh-8pE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KGrM1sh-8pE[/video]

But they're in no way a direct rip off of the song. I just how I instantly thought of it.

Keep writing music, doing what you love, and may you find happiness and success in the end! ^^

 

[Raindrop14]

Hey, this sounds pretty good. I agree with Thar, I like the flow of the lyrics. ^^ You should play it and let hear it! <3