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Thanks a lot Ari! I really appreciate the feedback you're giving! I'll be sure to keep in mind to use comas and whatnot to make reading easier. Thanks again! ^^

Wow! Thank you so much! It really means a lot! :D

The reason I stopped uploading chapters here was because I moved to a new town. I don't know if people really read this, but I figured I might as well finnish what I started. :zelda: So, here goes: Chapter 5 The Emergency “Listen up! Bill and Edward, you’re the fastest runners. Run as quickly...

Thanks! ^^ And yeah, I do see what you mean about he rushed action, it's something I'll have to work on. Future action scenes may or may not improve. :sweat: Anyway, here's chapter two: Chapter 2 The Kraken “Larry, you and the other gunners gotta get as many cannons as possible over to the...

Hello! About a year and a half ago we got an assignment in Swedish class to write an "odyssey". I recently started translating the story into English, but since I live in Sweden Swedish is obviously my main language, so my English writing may be somewhat flawed. If somebody does read this I...