Thanks. Yours was great as well! It felt very creepypasta-esque to me with the song.
It was intentional! I wanted it to give the sense of the words being hurriedly written down, while the author was also descending into madness.
Your vocabulary is intimidating. Haha. It made the poem have a...
Lol, thanks. That's generally the style of writing I go for so I was pretty happy with how this one turned out.
The writing of your poem was very beautiful despite the theme. I am jealous of your style!