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Good job with this chapter so far. You gave us a chance at exploring the past with Link all over again. Your description of the forest temple is vivid and hearkening back to the original while trying to take steps on its own. I also loved the description you gave Foilfos, making him a very...

Alright I just checked it out and I must say, much better. It gives a better explanation of how Link got all that stuff when we weren't looking. It was a perfect change that gave us a chance to advance Link's quest without a hiccup. We got to look more into his past again and understand the...

Well if you thought nothing happened, why didn't you just merge it with Chapter 6 and you would've had both story moving and a fight scene.

Not exactly, a boring and lackluster chapter can have merit if you give it something plot progressing, and an episode based entirely on action can sometimes seem lackluster as well if you don't get much done in it. Not insulting you, just saying that thinking like that might not be the best way...

Alright I've gotten a look at this chapoter now and I must say that I'm impressed at your skills at making fights. However I cannot say much else as this chapter was based entirely around fighting and although there is good entertainment, there is nothing really plot progressing in this chapter...

I am sorry I did not notice the last update. :( I will try to be more consistent. Anyways, Chapter 3 was an enjoyable chapter where we got explanation to everything happening. We got to see more into the situation that has gripped Hyrule for many a generation has come anew in this journey...

I'd have to say that I like this fic. I say that you rely a little too much on dialogue though. This kind of makes it similar to a script. However, I would never ask you to go major on the details (heavens no.) Maybe a little more details than used now? :D I must say that I enjoyed this little...