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    The Book of the Hero - The fires of war (looking for critiques!)

    Hey, i know it's been two years but great work! I'm surprised no one has commented yet after all this time. My only suggestion is that instead of it going like: "A fairy", Queen Castrelda murmered softly. "I found you". "VERILY, THOU HAST DONE WELL........... it should have the Queen maybe...
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