I'd suggest maybe following a format so the Article is more organized, that way there aren't wild transitions. Maybe go by how the progression of the game intoduces different people and elements you want to touch on. Also remember that even inanimate objects have philosophical significance in Majora's Mask, like time itself.
One last tip, menetioning that Kafei sounds or is spelled like “Caffiene” is not needed and sort of weakens your prose. The same thing with asking “Why does the moon have a face?” that is a question better left out.
Well you sort of go into philosophy but it seems like you don't have a format to follow (as you skip from Anju and Kafei and start talking about the moon). Your philosophical analysis for Anju and Kafei is decent but could be worked on. With the moon you sort of go in depth about a hypothetical scenario rather than staying on topic and talking about the fear the moon imposes on the people of Termina.