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Daniel opened the trunk of the black car and inside was a Motorcycle. He quickly chased after Cyrus.

Daniel fired the gun in the heat of the moment, hitting Cyrus' mechanical arm.

Daniel makes three swift punches at Cyrus' face, knocking him back a few feet. It begins to storm.

Daniel quickly and discretely walked up to Cyrus. "Hello, old friend." Daniel pulled a gun out of his pocket and put it up to Cyrus' back. "We're going for a ride. It's time for you to live up to my expectations." A black car pulls up to the curb, and Daniel tells Cyrus to get in.

Hello. I'm writing a story for our school writing fair in May. I haven't done much work on the actual story, but I have done a lot for the back story of the world and what I plan to do with it. I made a rough draft of about a third of the first chapter, and was hoping I could get some feedback...

Outside Max-Co. Was a man in his early forties, wearing the clothes of an average fellow. Daniel was not average. He was the former leader of The Department of Deception in America. He was close to accomplishing his goal, until Cyrus acted up. Maybe if I let him know his role, he would have...

Hey, I'd like to put in my character from before, but with changes. Name: Daniel Payne Age: 41 Gender: Male Appearance: Short brown hair, a strong jawline, and a fair build. 6 feet 2' and wears poor class clothesA thick beard Personality: Liar. Deceiving. Uses others for his own gain. Wants...

(sorry I haven't been active enough lately.) Daniel carried a body bag to his trunk. inside was Cyrus. He was not dead, but he wasn't conscious either. He wouldn't be for a few more hours. The tests had been completed, and Project LIBERUM was closer to being a reality. The past few days will be...

(Darknut, that's okay. Will you still continue your Big Brother RPG though?)

Okay, but Keeseman, you can not claim anymore characters. 2 is the limit.

(sorry, I've been really busy lately.) Jacob Hunt entered the Warriors Temple. It was dark, with very little light. There was a door in the center, with four unlit orbs around it. There was also four other doors in the chamber. He entered the green door.

Jacob hunt finishes packing, and they set out for SnowPeak. (sorry, I fell asleep earlier, or I would have replied.)

"We don't make slaves. You see, those under the effects of the Chip don't aren't even aware of it. They'll go on the rest of their lives not knowing it. They believe whatever we tell them, and think that was their own original thought." Daniel pulled out a syringe filled with a green liquid and...

You are you, but your memories of your arrest and holding are a lie. You went to a hospital one day, in a mandatory test on all the citizens of America. We were looking for your mutated Gene. We found it in you. We stole you in the middle of the night, and preformed Tests on you. Tests we will...

"Well okay. Join me if you will. History will show Jacob Hunt And Cyrus Making our way through the Mountains to The Warriors Temple, To Claim the Hero's Jewels, and Slay any beasts in our way."