I PMed you two chapters, hope you like them, I sort of proofread them but found only a ltile mistake that I fixed, but still Im not the best proofreader
I wrote many chapters and the day, I was going to send them, my Mom needed my computer. She had read the story before and notice some mistakes; she ended proofreading everything
But no worries, as soon as I finish a new chapter Im gonna send it to you, unless i find my Mom proofreading it:hmm: