Forgive me for bothering you, but i have a suggestion.
For your avatar, if you flip it so the sword is swinging right to left not left to right, i'll make it look a lil better. Yiu don't have to, i'm just making a suggestion...
Hey there sir ZD critic~ ^^
Forgive me for bothering you, but I'm looking for constructive criticisms on a particularly long Zelda poem I've invested quite an amount of time writing which can be found here. I've revised it until I can't think anymore, and so I really need fresh opinions on it that can direct me to what exactly can still be worked upon, because I'd like to perfect it as much as possible if I can. If it isn't too much to ask, I'd be glad to get your input on it~ ^^