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  • I read your story just a while ago. It's good, but you did make many mistakes, mostly typos and left out words at times, which let me know that you probably were rushing it? You even called Link Linked, lol. But yeah, look at chapter 3, that's the one that contains many mistakes. I only saw two in chapter 2, chapter 1 was the best with hardly any mistakes.
    Yep, that link is visible now. I will have to be leaving shortly because I am going out. I will probably be back in like five or six hours. I will then sit down and read your story and then tell you what I thought of it.
    I couldn't have a look at your story since I needed to log in. I once had an account there but I lost my password, so yeah, tough luck for me, eh?
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